your words. leave scars., all roses have their thorns. |
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 Jun 8 2004, 01:22 AM
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just something i wrote a few days ago. i think yesterday? anyway..this is for a friend, and every line is kind of a meaning for something in her life.
she filled her bath with roses showered her body with their petals ripped the thorns from their stems and cut her life away first line: her boyfriend, the rose in her life. second line: how he treats her, his love to her. third line: the words that he said to hurt her. fourth line: what the words do to her. =] hope you guys like that |
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Jun 8 2004, 02:25 AM
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 Serious As A Heart Attack. Group: Member Posts: 2,292 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,344 |
omgosh that is realli good! so intelligent too hehe..i realli like that
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Jun 8 2004, 11:52 AM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
So many suicide poems...
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Jun 15 2004, 09:25 PM
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 Huggs Group: Member Posts: 39 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,457 |
very nice!
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Jun 16 2004, 04:39 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,077 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,904 |
Short but so so meaningful.
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Jun 16 2004, 06:42 AM
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 Afflicted: Hurt. Group: Member Posts: 443 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 4,295 |
That was such a simple poem but it very meaningful. How sweet.
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Jun 17 2004, 12:37 PM
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I could've sworn I replied in this already. Hmm. Anywho, it's very short and gets down to the point. I like how you even interpreted it.
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