Complications, poem..these are gonna be rare |
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 Jan 30 2007, 02:07 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
Comlication arisen from situations
Situations that have been caused by nothing but frustrations Frustrations formed by naivety Naivety brought about by anxiety Anxiety brings about nothing but fear And with it, happiness begins to fade and disappear Loss of happiness is loss of self Store happiness on the shelf Never lose it or misplace it Complications may arise, But that's no reason for happiness to be at a demise |
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Jan 30 2007, 08:16 AM
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look for the stars as the sun goes down Group: Member Posts: 493 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 453,963 |
wow this is actually really good. nothing to emo. and not so long. i love it.
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Jan 30 2007, 08:48 AM
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As expected of you, Good job/ I liked how contrasted between fear, anxiety and happiness.
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Jan 30 2007, 06:39 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
thanks :D
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Jan 30 2007, 10:31 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 140 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,291 |
i liked how you put it into a rhyme scheme.
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Jan 31 2007, 12:55 PM
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 CheccMate Foo! Group: Member Posts: 839 Joined: Dec 2006 Member No: 487,531 |
I like it. It got me thinking of a whole new perspective on life. Honest because I been depressed for a while now.
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