love poem Options

[mzislandpinay]

I can`t keep sittin here thinkin` yooh are mine
khuz yooh still be messin` wit dem dimes.
i'm not lonely bhu i`m certainly hurtin`.
the boy i love keeps on flirtin`.
"Yo0h can play around too"
bhu why would i do that if it might end up loosin` yooh.
Member our promise, "never to loose one another"
khuz me & yooh always got each other
bhu wha if one day a boy took ur place
& we could neva see each other face 2 face.
We had the chance & we still do
to call each other one & only boo.
i`ll still keep waitin` khuz i knoe you love me.
jhus the way that i need you to be right next to me.
Patience is the key to love.
Struggle is the pain to love.
Through thick&think i`ll be by ur side
khuz this love of ourz shall never die

[Misternobody]

This is pretty good, i can see what your trying to do with this and your doing it to a point, some parts seem a little repetitive to me but it's not a big deal, I'm assuming that English is not your first language because i seen quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes, that makes it a little more difficult to see that whole picture, anyhow, like i said, it's good but i feel like you could switch it up a bit to keep the reader more interested, all in all, i would rate it a 6/10.