Red Stars and Blue Beams Options

[Jackaroe]

Red Stars and Blue Beams

Red stars and blue beams
shooting down from the sky,
and zooming towards me
to burn my tearing eye;
with angels singing low,
lamenting my misdeeds
and wondering why
I can't be the one he needs;
for red flowers on the wrist,
a ring of thorns pierce my skin
as I wait in the utter empty,
for cupid to let me win.
but losing is my talent,
a broken heart my prize,
and all I can do is wonder,
why I drown in fictional lies.
and the stars still move ahead,
the world spins and turns.
red stars and blue beams,
continue to fall and burn.
my eyes will forever water,
red flowers and thorns will dry,
until the day I gouge my heart,
And wait for love to die.

[Ekay]

I love your rhyme schemes. so different and so unique. nicely written.