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Delusive Revamp, Complete?
anime-essence
post Dec 30 2006, 09:05 PM
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http://delusiverevamp.schizoidbeat.org/
^I think with everyone's help, I finally finished my subdomain. The Wordpress theming was a real bug, but I loved the results though. thumbsup.gif [On one design, the pattern doesn't align, just so everyone knows, thanks! - Also, if you would like to be linked as a friend, please personal message me so I will edit whenever I get chance.]
 
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post Dec 30 2006, 11:05 PM
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the link doesnt work...
 
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post Dec 30 2006, 11:06 PM
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Actually, your header doesn't show up.

I mean, I see the website and all, I just don't see the header image. =/
 
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post Dec 31 2006, 01:27 AM
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ok, now i see it.

I don't like your font choice, size, or formatting (caps). if i can't read it at midnight (and i'm normally browsing blogs at midnight), then i'm not staying. the arrow and paper clip icons in the date really throw me off. maybe if they weren't black...
your sidebar text should not be set on justify. those gaps are very unpleasant, and as i am already having trouble reading your content in my tired state, theres no way i'm going anywhere near the sidebar.
your header is quite large... perhaps consider resizing a bit?
the green in your header clashes somewhat with the pale yellow.... i would suggest making the yellow bolder, or the green less saturated.

oh, where will your navigation go once you have pages? i dont like where it is now, and it wont work once you start adding content.

other than that i like it! the socket face thing is cute. congrats on getting your subdomain finished! (sorry about all my criticism... it feels good to be writing for something other than a college essay)
 
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post Dec 31 2006, 03:54 AM
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I really like the image but not the font that is used on it. Overall, nice work.
 
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post Dec 31 2006, 11:35 AM
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QUOTE(insomniac @ Dec 31 2006, 12:27 AM) *
ok, now i see it.

I don't like your font choice, size, or formatting (caps). if i can't read it at midnight (and i'm normally browsing blogs at midnight), then i'm not staying. the arrow and paper clip icons in the date really throw me off. maybe if they weren't black...
your sidebar text should not be set on justify. those gaps are very unpleasant, and as i am already having trouble reading your content in my tired state, theres no way i'm going anywhere near the sidebar.
your header is quite large... perhaps consider resizing a bit?
the green in your header clashes somewhat with the pale yellow.... i would suggest making the yellow bolder, or the green less saturated.

oh, where will your navigation go once you have pages? i dont like where it is now, and it wont work once you start adding content.

other than that i like it! the socket face thing is cute. congrats on getting your subdomain finished! (sorry about all my criticism... it feels good to be writing for something other than a college essay)

Haha, it's totally fine. As for the header image, I would have loved to see the criticism in my earlier post in Graphics Showcase, then I would have considered it before actually coding the theme. I see where your dislike in the font comes from, I disliked it as well, but I was really tired of the boring "Arial" font. Thanks for being so blunt. happy.gif
 

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