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helpless, and she'll work you heart
RiddleMeWonders
post Dec 4 2006, 08:49 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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this isn't anything that you would go psycho for
your eyes wouldn't bulge at the sides
and your lips wouldn't move to whistle
and your teeth wouldn't slice the air in talk
you would more likely be drugged
into a haze of boredom
and fall on your face in the daylight
with 5 other people looking on
in laughter at you, not me
and when they dragged you away
i'd just sit there waiting for the next one
i'm very good at begging, you see
i haven't a lot of experience
but most people observe that my heart is in it
that i try by gosh darn my very best
to pull that penny from their pockets
my tricks, like i said are not so impressive
it's in my eyes that people who have the inkling
which allows me to tug at their cores edge
they have to look twice and they can't bear it
the legs that bore me have lain down 12 years now
in a bed that will soon be flower covered
once i have enough money
the hands that held me in infancy have rotted away
to a stay of helplessness they can not hope to change
with any amount of the coins i'll take from you
just give me a break please
 
*Azarel*
post Dec 5 2006, 02:58 AM
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I like your diction in this piece.
 

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