Just a poem, How i feel about my ex Options

[eboarder2020]

hey guys,

I wrote this poem after my ex girlfriend hurt me by giving aload of crap and stuff. I havent found a title for it yet so yeah... any comments or suggestions would be nice.


Go ahead
Blame it on me
You wanted to use me
so why are you unhappy?

You've made your points
clear and crystal
You've spoke your mind
harsh and brutal


You left
And walked Away
And its you
who makes me pay

My friends give you shit
about the actions you do
And by god you deserve it
The world only looks up to you

But its ok
place the blame on me
it was you
that I wanted to be happy

Either road you chose
Im here all alone
No one to talk to
and no one on the phone

Well Im on this path
Scared as shit
And I'll look around for you
But im just another promise you never kept

I thought the worst weas over
but boy was I wrong
Cuz the only thing I felt
was that you wanted me gone

So I'll cry tonight
another million or two
Praying to god
That I can hold onto you

I will kneel
and close my eyes
and say a prayer
that sounds like this:

"Dear lord, forgive me for what I've done. I fell in love for the beautiful one. And now shes come to hurt me, and its my biggest fear. My arms grow weak and my legs like paper. Please help me lord fight the slayer. I'm stuck here with pain and hurt. Please lord ease the pain and save me from the rain. Shes torn my heart to peices uncountable, and right now Im left in a sturggle. So help me god, make a wish come true, help her realize when I say 'I love you."

*sigh*...

This pavement shines like silver in the rain
and I'll throw my arms out to the wind
hoping its you to ease my pain.
But your not here
and you dont care
But its ok though...


Your already Way a Way from here

[Sa-Chan]

This is a really good poem.

The title could be "Way Away From Here"