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 Oct 19 2006, 03:34 PM
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 Don't worry guys, size doesn't matter...to lesbians  Group: Member Posts: 2,444 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,066  |
There you are holding onto love
With a jubilant smile that washed it all away Crying softly in the midst of all the misery You were cradled by the past Gazing so softly among the stars They glisten only for you Now here you are walking a blind path Abandoning guidance with its concern Painting your own picture of the world Its heavens surrounding you with light Radiant and affluent Emulating the celestial sanctuary you've left Such a brave girl Such a naiive girl Letting ignorance follow her road Entangled in the oblivion of nothingness She became the past's silhouette The future's reaper What a dismal sound A horrifying cry Locked in the somber cage of death --- if you don't get it, basically it depicts the life of a woman. Growing up, blissfully aware, until bam, there goes reality. |
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Oct 27 2006, 05:34 PM
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 Photoartist Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,363 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 399,390 |
Pretty good, I like the idea of it.
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Oct 31 2006, 05:45 PM
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 Visible_TrUst Group: Member Posts: 42 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,030 |
nice! i like the idea behind it.
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Nov 2 2006, 07:23 AM
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 Name: Keisha :] Group: Member Posts: 142 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 457,727 |
Oh wow, I liked it a lot. I love poems written like this. Also, I can relate with your subject.
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