Relationships: A Tangential(poetic) View, This prose-poem looks at relationships--poeticcally |
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 Oct 6 2006, 12:03 AM
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Ron Price  Group: Member Posts: 6 Joined: Sep 2006 Member No: 465,700  |
MOTH BALLS
It might be easier To fail-with Land in Sight- Than gain-My Blue Peninsula- To perish-of Delight- -Emily Dickinson, Number 405. ...there is an interdependence of diverse points of view rather than a totality of a single vision. We must get behind the enigmas, the paradoxes, the inter-relationships, the rules that govern all. -Bahiyyih Nakhjavani and Abdu’l-Baha in “Artist, Seeker and Seer”, Baha’i Studies, Vol.10, p.3. These words of mine born from some mist high upon that tree, are drenched in a silent spring than noone tastes or sees. Like an Indian summer entirely, as if a gift on judgement day, or ressurection at last right here for me. The sun shone on; the flowers blew; all things were now made new. Time went by so fast I thought: this will not last, this dew. My glee is quiet, obsessive; it rolls on wheels of snow. I feel like I’m in eider down or in some cedar chest where moth balls keep what’s best. Ron Price 24 November 1995 |
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Oct 6 2006, 08:27 AM
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I'm so confused... O-o
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Oct 6 2006, 09:48 PM
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 All The Girlies Say I'm Pretty Fly For A White Guy Group: Member Posts: 1,944 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 400,858 |
Yeah um point?
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Oct 6 2006, 09:52 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 2,614 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,903 |
wait what?
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Oct 6 2006, 10:08 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Interesting ... though i'm not following you all the way.
=MOVED TO WRITING= |
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Oct 7 2006, 01:15 AM
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 You say you eat fucking hearts for breakfast. Group: Member Posts: 662 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 28,026 |
Are you bringing in allusions from the two famous writings to create a poem of your own?
Either way, very creative writing in terms of drawing things out scenically. |
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