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go easy, first graphic
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post Sep 2 2006, 02:16 PM
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post Sep 2 2006, 02:23 PM
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The blending is nice. It's just the color that's weird to me. I guess I'm just so use to textures. blink.gif But overall nice job.
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 02:25 PM
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blending could be a bit neater. the rectangle thingy can be skinnier and a diff font.but its ok
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 02:34 PM
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The rectangle just bothers me. Maybe make it skinnier like suggested above. And that random small rectangle next to the big one...eh. whatever. But nice job; keep it up! (=
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 05:31 PM
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I like the blending and color choices. :) But the rectangles in general don't look like they belong.
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 06:34 PM
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I think it's pretty cool for your first graphic. :)
Maybe you could've just gave the image a green tint.
Next time decrease the opacity of the green layer,
if that makes sense. xD
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 06:45 PM
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.... When you blend, please try not to erase things like elbows. The middle picture looks awkward because you can still see where the elbow is (that should be blended a little neater...) and it doesn't look like she's standing behind the other girl and therefore her elbow has dissappeared. It looks silly.

And when you use boxes, please try to make one side the "edge" of your graphic (or fade both ends?). It looks a little neater like that... And not so much like a floating box that serves no purpose.

As x_nova mentioned, lowering the opacity of the green layer might look a little better. wink.gif Mostly 'cause... Like... -thinks of how to explain it- She looks sick. It's the colour of green you chose, I think. Because, well... It's a sickly green. mellow.gif Try to stay away from colours like that when your subject is a human...

And as a final note, it's plain. I know you may have wanted it like that, but a little texture or a few stratigecally placed brushes never hurt anyone. ^_^
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 06:45 PM
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That's actually pretty good for a first! _smile.gif The blending is a little off and she's transparent a bit, but I don't blame you since it's your first. I don't really like the rectangle, either. Overall, it's good. Keep it up! thumbsup.gif
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 06:48 PM
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Her elbow is blended into her cheek, so that's not good. Also the green isn't good, and the box doesn't go well. happy.gif
 
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post Sep 2 2006, 09:05 PM
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The blending was done well I think for your first, although the whole face on the very left picture doesn't look right. Maybe its the shade of green or texture you used. It makes it look a little odd.

I think you did really well though, I'd like to see more out of you and see what else you can do. flowers.gif
 
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post Sep 3 2006, 02:16 PM
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The rectangle seems a bit too big.I like the blending though.GREAT FOR A FIRST !
 
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post Sep 7 2006, 05:20 PM
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the rectangle does look a little large, and the blending is a little off. but it's very nice for your first. _smile.gif

and i love the green. :D
 

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