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go easy, first graphic |
| *iRyan* |
Sep 2 2006, 02:16 PM
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Sep 2 2006, 02:23 PM
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Cassie™ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 143 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 459,516 |
The blending is nice. It's just the color that's weird to me. I guess I'm just so use to textures.
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Sep 2 2006, 02:25 PM
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
blending could be a bit neater. the rectangle thingy can be skinnier and a diff font.but its ok
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Sep 2 2006, 02:34 PM
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![]() the bird and the bee sides! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,697 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 201,280 |
The rectangle just bothers me. Maybe make it skinnier like suggested above. And that random small rectangle next to the big one...eh. whatever. But nice job; keep it up! (=
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Sep 2 2006, 05:31 PM
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mood: content ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 2,063 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,325 |
I like the blending and color choices. :) But the rectangles in general don't look like they belong.
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Sep 2 2006, 06:34 PM
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![]() Funny ol` world innit? ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 133 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 144,657 |
I think it's pretty cool for your first graphic. :)
Maybe you could've just gave the image a green tint. Next time decrease the opacity of the green layer, if that makes sense. xD |
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Sep 2 2006, 06:45 PM
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![]() You'll find me in your dreams. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 8,536 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 114,010 |
.... When you blend, please try not to erase things like elbows. The middle picture looks awkward because you can still see where the elbow is (that should be blended a little neater...) and it doesn't look like she's standing behind the other girl and therefore her elbow has dissappeared. It looks silly.
And when you use boxes, please try to make one side the "edge" of your graphic (or fade both ends?). It looks a little neater like that... And not so much like a floating box that serves no purpose. As x_nova mentioned, lowering the opacity of the green layer might look a little better. And as a final note, it's plain. I know you may have wanted it like that, but a little texture or a few stratigecally placed brushes never hurt anyone. ^_^ |
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Sep 2 2006, 06:45 PM
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![]() Pocketful of Sunshine ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,690 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 289,004 |
That's actually pretty good for a first!
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Sep 2 2006, 06:48 PM
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& my dreams fall down ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 1,173 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 291,336 |
Her elbow is blended into her cheek, so that's not good. Also the green isn't good, and the box doesn't go well.
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| *This Confession* |
Sep 2 2006, 09:05 PM
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The blending was done well I think for your first, although the whole face on the very left picture doesn't look right. Maybe its the shade of green or texture you used. It makes it look a little odd.
I think you did really well though, I'd like to see more out of you and see what else you can do. |
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Sep 3 2006, 02:16 PM
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![]() the name is ada. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
The rectangle seems a bit too big.I like the blending though.GREAT FOR A FIRST !
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Sep 7 2006, 05:20 PM
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![]() ghostbuster famous ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2006 Member No: 420,197 |
the rectangle does look a little large, and the blending is a little off. but it's very nice for your first.
and i love the green. :D |
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