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Im not a girl, not yet a woman, xD
ST3PHANIE
post Aug 28 2006, 08:00 PM
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Ok so I've been working on this for about 2 hours and I wanted to put this in the showcase so i can see what you guys think and w/e before I contribute it. So opinions are welcome : ) I am new at this so be nice x.x lol



Sorry I had to fix the title, it was driving me insane. -Gypsy Eyes
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:06 PM
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Im going to be harsh. but really, you need to hear honest harsh advice to get better.

--> Image quality horrible
--> Scratchy hearts like those just make the whole graphic look trashy.
--> Pictures of BS in the frames are extremely blurry.

Basically, the whole blurryness of it just makes it look like...well..bad.
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:06 PM
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thats really cute! even though im not a britney spears fan :] its really good even though sherlock /\ doesnt think so
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:11 PM
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Thanks for your opion sherlock..I'll shall fix the "bluryness"
I sharpened it as much as I could without it looking well too sharp


http://img237.imageshack.us/my.php?image=britney23bj9.jpg
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:20 PM
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The side images look a little better, but the center image is still blurry.

You need more practice. Get a different picture. The quality of that one is bad.

I don't really like the scribble heart brush.

( it's "woman" wink.gif )
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:23 PM
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I thought you could spell it either "woman" or "women"?
 
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post Aug 28 2006, 08:27 PM
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Woman = Singular. Women = More than one..
Women is the plural for Woman.
Just like Men/Man. Its the same thing, Basically.
Anyways, I agree with Kristina about the brush and the image quality//blurryness. :\
 
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post Aug 29 2006, 06:49 AM
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100% agreeing with kristina.
 
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post Aug 29 2006, 06:52 PM
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If she's not a girl not yet a woman. What does it make her? blink.gif A man?!

sorry. But I agree with Kristina
 
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post Aug 29 2006, 07:58 PM
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i totally agree with Sherlock your graghic needs a lot of work...but keep trying you will get better!! _smile.gif

i'm not a BS fan though sad.gif
 
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post Aug 29 2006, 08:09 PM
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I agree with Kristina on what she first said oh shes Sherlock by the way.

Anyway first off you just picked a bad person to be on it. Its not even her anymore. SO eh, also the little pictures were blurry and then when you sharpened them it didn't look right.. Perhaps since you new next time always pick better quality photos. Put what you want to go on it that you want the piece of art to portray out to others.. So if you want it to look elegant make it look elegant, put a elegant font and some pretty classy brushes, not trashy ones.

I'm sure with a little practice you'll be making great graphics soon flowers.gif
Just take some patience, and don't let some good ol' criticism let you down, just take it on making things better and go do them happy.gif
 
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post Aug 29 2006, 10:48 PM
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bad image quality.scribbles don`t match.really simple.good try =]
 
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post Aug 30 2006, 03:41 PM
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agree with sherlock. but you have good placement and a good idea of what to do. nice try!
 
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post Aug 30 2006, 07:40 PM
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Thank you all, Your harsh critisim will (hopefully) make me better at making graphics :)
But eh, it was my first so im not going to take it too seriously.. :)
 

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