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The sounds of fanfare! DUN DUN DUN! Now showing you my myspace!, (I need Crits BAD)
skt
post Aug 20 2006, 02:40 PM
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Ok, so this is my first version.
We'll call it 0.1 because there's alot I already know I want to fix.
And alot more to "add" per say.
I think I could drop the image down a bit, and then work from there.
And I know the links on the bottom are showin' a bit for now it works.
Anyways, so give me some crits people!
(Yes that's a horribly done vector of my face, with no eyes.)

The moment you've been waiting for, my myspace!
 
x_nova
post Aug 20 2006, 04:11 PM
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It's good for your first div! Maybe change the navigation to a separate div outside the speech bubble?
 
HakunaMatata
post Aug 20 2006, 05:16 PM
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It's good for a first, I like that its simple. I don't like how the vector has a corner, it'd look a lot better if it was the full head. I think that the arrow that comes from the box and toward your face should be the same color as the border for the box, but other than that, it's nice. I like the color you chose for the background. Keep at it, once you learn how to use DIVs, making layouts is quite addicting. (:
 
RxCore
post Aug 20 2006, 05:22 PM
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QUOTE(x_nova @ Aug 20 2006, 2:11 PM) *
It's good for your first div! Maybe change the navigation to a separate div outside the speech bubble?
yeah i pretty much agree.

other than that good job for your first div! clap.gif
 
skt
post Aug 20 2006, 06:00 PM
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That what I was thinking, however I don't know if moving the main thingy over would screw everything up or not.

I call this version 0.1 because it isn't finished. It was just to test and see if I could actually get it to work.

The saddest part is, I already have plans for a new one.

Edit: I even made notes, to myself and took screenshots on what I did wrong.
I must really be a huge nerd.
 
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post Aug 20 2006, 06:46 PM
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QUOTE(skt @ Aug 20 2006, 4:00 PM) *
The saddest part is, I already have plans for a new one.


See? Addicting.
 
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post Aug 20 2006, 06:48 PM
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^yes very addicting,

anyway its really simple yet its neat. The bottom links show though. Thats the only thing that I see is a real problem.

Good for your first flowers.gif
 
skt
post Aug 20 2006, 09:24 PM
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Thanks everyone!
I really want to make another one, but i'm kind of burnt out spending so much time trying to think of a good FIRST one.

I'll leave this be for a couple days, (maybe) then we'll see.
Haha.
 
rorhinna
post Aug 20 2006, 11:35 PM
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its alright
but good
for a first DIV
good job. :)
 
Aerjae
post Aug 21 2006, 02:28 AM
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umm... I guess it's okay... for a first timer. Next time, try not to make it so plain. But overall it's pretty good! happy.gif
 
skt
post Aug 21 2006, 02:32 AM
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Haha thanks.
IT was more of a rush to get something up than of quality for now, because this is my first time doing anything like this and I wanted to see if I COULD do it.

I'm already working on my next one, at least inside my head.
Or add ons to this one.
hehe. thumbsup.gif
 
RxCore
post Aug 23 2006, 10:55 PM
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i saw your added nav! g'job!

just hide your bottom links! thumbsup.gif
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table tr td div div {visibility:hidden;border:0px!important;background-color:transparent;}
 
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post Aug 24 2006, 12:17 AM
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It looks really nice for you're first. If you drew that face, that's cool. I can't draw like that.
 

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