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 Jul 18 2006, 02:02 AM
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 Pokeball, GO!  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 2,832 Joined: Jul 2006 Member No: 433,009  |
In the End Scholars searching for all the answers And they've yet to open their eyes Solving equations to society's cancers Shrouding mistakes in cover ups and lies No longer heeding to progress but to greed Brilliant minds fall victim to ignorance They will unveil the evils of their deed When mankind ceases any benevolence No sweet scent of a better tomorrow No justice shall remain They're running low on time to borrow They will fall victim to an ember's red flame Only a fragment of a greater fire And still they burn from its evil sequence All this was created by their ill desire And the actions of our leading delinquents © Brenden Noll
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Jul 27 2006, 05:06 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
i like the first four sentences caught my eyes to keep reading more good job!
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Aug 9 2006, 09:28 PM
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 I Love Brenden! <3 Group: Member Posts: 90 Joined: Aug 2006 Member No: 450,342 |
i love it, like usual
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