LOL LIFE SUCKS, POEM #3 |
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 Jun 30 2006, 01:13 PM
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POWAPOSTA  Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725  |
My Poem about the illusion of life:
Vast figures in a far away appearance Scattered letters and broken breath mints Uncertainty with my insecurity Why wont my love see About this false poornosss and reality Endless pit of stale fruit snacks Nothing in life is beautiful When all is a dream |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jul 2 2006, 02:50 AM
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And what a tragic, depressing life you must live. The horrors of stale fruit snacks.
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Jul 2 2006, 09:38 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you! Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674 |
 Touching.
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Jul 2 2006, 09:29 PM
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POWAPOSTA Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725 |
I HATE STALE FRUIT SNACKS
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Jul 4 2006, 08:31 AM
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 yan lin♥ Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 14,129 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,627 |
^ Please, don't spam.
Somehow, your poem comes off a bit shallow. |
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| *Kathleen* |
Jul 5 2006, 02:24 AM
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A tad?
 Mmm this entire forum is becoming more shallow. I haven't seen too much quality lately. 
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Jul 7 2006, 11:03 AM
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POWAPOSTA Group: Member Posts: 3,169 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 30,725 |
lol when i posted this on my fake xanga (XMACENCIX) someone also said it was shallow
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