Umm a poem?, it doesn't have a title.. |
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 Jun 25 2006, 07:31 PM
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 Mrs. Delonge  Group: Member Posts: 426 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 406,185  |
Yeah, I don't title my poems... but I have like a whole hell of a lot of poems, but I really like this one... so here goes..
I know it's dumb I thought it through The fact that I still care for you Undying Passion can't you see? I know you're not in love with me! I love you still My heart will keep This feeling in myself so deep I'll walk the path You've made for me 'Cause to my heart you hold the key Your words will hurt They cut so quick The pain inside will only stick. Say what you want It's all the same Remember that it's not a game It will kill me Just you wait And I will keep my story straight. Yepp... that's all. :) I hope you all like it. |
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Jun 25 2006, 07:50 PM
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 lx Group: Member Posts: 300 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,440 |
hm.. I don't know if there's supposed to be a pattern, but there are some rhyming there.. :shrugg:
anyways, seems pretty good, but not very "professional" but it's good to write out your thoughts and feelings. keep writing ^^ |
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Jun 25 2006, 09:14 PM
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Mrs. Delonge Group: Member Posts: 426 Joined: May 2006 Member No: 406,185 |
Yeah... it's the only poem I've ever written in ABB form... usually I write in ABCB hehe...
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