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| *Kathleen* |
 May 21 2004, 08:03 PM
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So yeah, here's something that's actually not about depression or love stories.
Blood Thief By day, he stalks By night, he preys Endless nights Lonesome days Longing to walk in the sun As he devours the current victim, he asks "Why did I have to be the one?" Blood seeps through his pale fingers With a thud, she drops to the ground Even he sensed that her spirit still lingered Staggering onward, he looks to the sky Dazzling stars still danced; he was safe He lives forever, but still asks, "Why?" In a way, he's cursed for eternity At the same time, one would say he deserves it But many have not yet seen Oh how he loved to torture, and still does That's partly why he's this now A blood thief, just because... |
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May 21 2004, 08:05 PM
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 Senior Member  Group: Member Posts: 1,795 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,421 |
Awesome!!! Wow.. I've gotta say.. these keep getting better.. I love this one
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May 21 2004, 09:26 PM
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 ÖÐÎÄÈí¼þ Group: Member Posts: 2,072 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 10,655 |
That is awesome! I love the theme of this poem, and it's beautifully-written :D. I love the dark and mysterious feeling to it.
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May 22 2004, 12:39 PM
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 Liv's Secret Lover *shhhh* Group: Member Posts: 201 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,229 |
Agreed! It's the kind of thing that makes you want to know so much who this guy is, why he was cursed to live forever, etc. Leaves the rest to the imagination. Nicely written.
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Jun 16 2004, 03:44 PM
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 ::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
ure poems are so visual. u could make a short movie outta this.
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Jun 16 2004, 03:48 PM
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::destroy ure tv:: Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,005 |
ure poems are so visual. u could make a short movie outta this.
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Jun 17 2004, 09:51 AM
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 The Ghostly Fox Spirit Group: Member Posts: 115 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,962 |
WAY TO GO KATHLEEN! ^_^ You never told me you wrote poetry...
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Jun 17 2004, 11:16 AM
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Kathleen!!!! That was good~I'm not a bloof theif. I am a boxer thief
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Jun 17 2004, 11:26 AM
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QUOTE WAY TO GO KATHLEEN! ^_^ You never told me you wrote poetry...  You don't know a lot of things, Regina. QUOTE I am a boxer thief Haha uh oh.  Gotta look out for you! 
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