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Big Brother was a man
He held my infant fingers Pushed me in the swing And carried me in when I fell asleep Big brother was a man Pinched me by the cheeks protected me from darkness And held on to my tiny hands Big brother grew old He left the house Took with him all fragments Of his youth in my heart Big brother flew away Into the sky Forsaken my heart Now left unguarded Big brother left his picture When we both loved each other Framed into my memories A memior of what is now a fantasy Big brother had a son Married his wife and left us soon I stood by the swing where we used to play Pushing it slowly, whispering "Big brother will come back someday His promise lays still in my heart When the sun shines golden in the world A smile worth memories from before An embrace once more remembered." Big brother never knew That I died one day Brought with me the life of all to come And the end of all to be seen Big brother wrote a letter Saying he loves and miss me more than ever Big brother died of a fever Where in misery he drowned Forever and ever ---- This poem is very figurative in a way. It's (obviously) about my brother. Like it described we used to be very close until he became a teenanger. He barely comes home and always has a girlfriend hanging around. No he doesn't have a son but it's a "figurative" thing going on. The last stanza was basically a way to say he regretted what he had done. He lost himself during his years of drama and never became the way he ever was. |
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I really like it
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