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 May 9 2006, 05:59 PM
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 My name is really Matt... if you care.  Group: Member Posts: 1,442 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 258,234  |
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May 10 2006, 10:07 PM
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I love the concept and I love how it was presented but there's something that nags at me in regards to the syntax. It strikes me as compulsive thoughts just thrown onto paper; true emotion without structure and thoughts that were connected but at the same time not. Maybe thats what you were going for.
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May 11 2006, 04:38 PM
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 (Allison) Group: Human Posts: 420 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 395,668 |
I absolutely loved it, especially the last line; it seemed like a song lyric. It's better than anything I could ever do, that's for sure.
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May 14 2006, 06:42 PM
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aw, it was lovely.
 did you use photoshop? I'd love to learn how to do that, and I really need new fonts. <3 |
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