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Paul M. is baaac...
post Apr 14 2006, 03:54 PM
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Well, I think this could prove to be an exciting concept. Createblog members roleplaying to make a mini-series.

Createblog members apply for a part in this little show, and put together a monthly episode. The show will be quite similar to "The Simpsons", or even "Family Guy", in which it is a show about a family, with a mother, father, son and daughter making up the episodes.
Also, feel free to apply for a seperate part, in which you could create your own character, and they add a nice background character to the show.

Storylines can be pitched in by anybody, and the best way at the end of around a one week period will be chosen to be the months episode. Once the storyline for the episode has been chosen, the charcters themselves can talk amongst each other, either in the thread, in PM's, or on a live chat, and put all their jokes, drama, quotes and any other ideas together to form one funny, or dramatic, or what everelse, kind of show.

What do you say?
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:02 PM
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well.......it's an interesting idea! although i don't understand how we would make it a TV show
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:03 PM
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Yeah, it's more just the basic concept of a TV show, and the script is posted, but the actual being on TV part...doesn't...happen...yeah...
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:06 PM
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yeah, i know it wouldn't be a TV show, so it would be more of a story? huh.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:07 PM
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In script form.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:27 PM
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This sounds like an entertaining idea. I wouldn't mind create my own character and entertaining others. _smile.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 04:28 PM
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Then please, give it a shot!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 05:04 PM
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urhm, im happy to ty it out, if someone else wants to organize the how and where
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 05:05 PM
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This thread, randomly blurt out your ideas.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 05:45 PM
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... are you talking about somewhat .... fanfiction contest or just fanfiction?

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post Apr 14 2006, 06:24 PM
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haha sounds interesting to me =)
i apply to be the clueless 6 year old daughter named sally who constantly over hears her sibling's PG13/R rated conversations laugh.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 07:44 PM
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I apply to be the quiet/violent and suicidal older daughter, who hates her family because she knows more than she's supposed to. _unsure.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 07:50 PM
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HAHAHAha. wierdo !!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 08:50 PM
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QUOTE(My Cinderella. @ Apr 14 2006, 8:44 PM) *
I apply to be the quiet/violent and suicidal older daughter, who hates her family because she knows more than she's supposed to. _unsure.gif

now you are my sister jane. and i over hear your conversations. hehehe. i could be like mommy what does suicide mean? and whoever plays the mom would scream what the _ _ _ _?!?! and the dad is cheating on the mom and........oh i'm so in to this.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 08:52 PM
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i apply to be the middle sister who is a goody-two-shoes and always gets in the middle of things between her suicidal sister and the younger 6 year old. OH! hehe this could be fun!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:03 PM
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yay krista too!
now we need a preppy brother who we all despise shifty.gif
yen should be in this, bu i don't know what she could be.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:04 PM
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which guy?

HAHA yen could be the short-tempered mom
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:10 PM
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 14 2006, 9:50 PM) *
now you are my sister jane. and i over hear your conversations. hehehe. i could be like mommy what does suicide mean? and whoever plays the mom would scream what the _ _ _ _?!?! and the dad is cheating on the mom and........oh i'm so in to this.
^ woo hoo i got a little sister

Now...we need a mummie.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:17 PM
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Hm, interesting.. I just don't know what character I should be.. _unsure.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:25 PM
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QUOTE(tic tac. @ Apr 14 2006, 10:17 PM) *
Hm, interesting.. I just don't know what character I should be.. _unsure.gif

the mom =x or maybe the girl that the husband is cheating with!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:33 PM
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^ HA! Good one.
We need someone to have an affair with our dad.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:34 PM
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who is our dad?
 
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^ For some reason, I see Eddie.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:43 PM
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who's your daddy? [/lame line]
lol.
eddie could be an alcoholic who is cheating on his wife with tina....who beats all of his daughters, that's why jane wants to commit suicide and the 6 year old umm carries her blanket everywhere (idk..) and krista tries to be as good as possible so she won't be beaten.
.....i should write soap operas
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:45 PM
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 14 2006, 9:43 PM) *
who's your daddy? [/lame line]
lol.
eddie could be an alcoholic who is cheating on his wife with tina....who beats all of his daughters, that's why jane wants to commit suicide and the 6 year old umm carries her blanket everywhere (idk..) and krista tries to be as good as possible so she won't be beaten.
.....i should right soap operas


haha. i think that's a little intense for me. lets make it more humorous!!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:45 PM
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^ Sounds like a good idea. I'm the one who knows that he's cheating. Which is why I think it's so sad. Poor Sally. This story reminds me of this...

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She was mad again, I could tell by the fire that flickered in her eyes. She grabbed the back of my shirt collared and rammed my head into the coffee table. "PLEASE! MUMMY! I BEG YOU! STOP! IM SORRY, MUMMY!" She ignored my desperate cries and continued to ram my head. I was shaking. I didn't know what to do. I never did. This is how it had always been in my family. Papa died not too long ago, and for that my mummy always hated me. I never understood what I could've done to make her hate me so bad. I loved her to death, and I melted when I saw her eyes fill with hatred --toward me, and only me.


Except we can make it into the dad's perspective.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:48 PM
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you're right krista, it has to be about cB....
but i love you're idea jane!
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:51 PM
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^ And guess who's the one who gets abuseeeedddd. rolleyes.gif

I keed. _smile.gif Who's going to be the most abused?
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:52 PM
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MOM?!?! Noo. Can I be the slutty teenage girl? Haha.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:54 PM
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QUOTE(My Cinderella. @ Apr 14 2006, 10:51 PM) *
^ And guess who's the one who gets abuseeeedddd. rolleyes.gif

I keed. _smile.gif Who's going to be the most abused?

me. the perfect target. the helpless 6 year old girl. sure you can be a slutty teenage girl but you're cheating with our dad stubborn.gif ....unless you have something better
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 09:59 PM
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QUOTE(tic tac. @ Apr 14 2006, 10:52 PM) *
MOM?!?! Noo. Can I be the slutty teenage girl? Haha.
^ 4 daughters. blink.gif Wow. Our dad must have it going on.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:00 PM
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Yeah, sure. Why not go for 5 daughters?! Haha.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:01 PM
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What about a manly brother who tries to help his sisters, but dies shortly because he got hit in the head with a bottle of vodka.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:03 PM
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but but but mommy where did (insert brother's name here) go?? mommy i want (insert brothers name here) cry.gif
 
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What should the brother's name be? Something...manly. boxing.gif
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:14 PM
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Ok, ok. Can I be the cool young aunt then? Haha
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:16 PM
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^ What role would she play as an aunt though?
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:35 PM
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^ Much similar to my role. Let's be twins.
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:36 PM
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jeez! there's gonna be a lot of daughters. someone has to be the wacko schitzophrenic grandma. OMG that would be hilarious. a grandma randomly comes into the house looking for her dentures. lol
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:43 PM
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^

Grandma: "Melina, dear. Have you seen my teeth"
Becka: Grandma, my name is Becka...
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:45 PM
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QUOTE(My Cinderella. @ Apr 14 2006, 10:43 PM) *
^

Grandma: "Melina, dear. Have you seen my teeth"
Becka: Grandma, my name is Becka...


YEAH! hahahaha biggrin.gif

oh! what exactly is the name of the "show"? is it just "the cB family"? that sounds boring

i change my mind. i'm not the daughter. i'm the crazy grandma
 
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post Apr 14 2006, 10:46 PM
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A Createblog Parody?
A Kodak Moment?
Tall tale heart.
 
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^ dance.gif Excellent. Now we need similar names.

I was thinking for my character to be named Helena (Hell-ena).
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 12:21 AM
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ME = FAMILY DOG NAMED FRANCHESCO

haha
or however you spell it
 
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^ With powers that can read minds! shifty.gif
 
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i'll be a corruptive borther/boyfriend/friend influence who appears to cause trouble for the daughters and lead them into unfortunate situations
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 06:26 AM
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 14 2006, 9:03 PM) *
yay krista too!
now we need a preppy brother who we all despise shifty.gif


I think I can fit into that category.

So far we have got:

skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter
My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter
robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality.
marzipan= Crazy Grandmother
Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother
POSSIBLY Eddie as a father
tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco)
Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother
I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father

Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul!
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 07:14 AM
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QUOTE(Paul M. is baaack @ Apr 15 2006, 12:26 PM) *
I think I can fit into that category.

So far we have got:

skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter
My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter
robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality.
marzipan= Crazy Grandmother
Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother
POSSIBLY Eddie as a father
tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco)
I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the twins, hated by the father and hates the father

Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul!


ahem... why am i the boyfriend of both twins?
 
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QUOTE(marzipan @ Apr 14 2006, 10:04 PM) *
which guy?

HAHA yen could be the short-tempered mom

mad.gif I'm definitely out of this idea.
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 08:30 AM
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i shall be Gramma Mae

QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Apr 15 2006, 7:17 AM) *
mad.gif I'm definitely out of this idea.


i was just kidding! laugh.gif
 
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QUOTE(Blow_Don't_SUCK @ Apr 15 2006, 8:17 AM) *
mad.gif I'm definitely out of this idea.

yen, you need to be a part of this!
you could be the suicidal daughters counsolers wink.gif
or something!
just please join!
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 09:54 AM
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^ yeah! please yen?
 
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post Apr 15 2006, 10:48 AM
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QUOTE(robb0 @ Apr 15 2006, 3:21 AM) *
Ooh. Helena and Hyena. Lol, totally kidding. Hmm...
francesco
^ Whenever I think of the name Helena, I think of the name Hermia from A Midsummer Night's dream.

QUOTE(Paul M. is baaack @ Apr 15 2006, 7:26 AM) *
I think I can fit into that category.

So far we have got:

skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter
My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter
robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality.
marzipan= Crazy Grandmother
Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother
POSSIBLY Eddie as a father
tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderella and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco)
I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the twins, hated by the father and hates the father

Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul!


Wow our father must be a sex machine...
 
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^my grandpa had more kids than that.

I'll be the mother...if we had that much kids imagine how active we could be...
 
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mommy what does lesbian mean?
 
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^my grandpa had more kids than that.

I'll be the mother...if we had that much kids imagine how active we could be...
^ YAY! Yen's the mummy! dance.gif
 
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So far we have got:

skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter (Sally)
My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter
robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality.
marzipan= Crazy Grandmother (Mae)
Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother (Paul)
POSSIBLY Eddie as a father
tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco)
Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother
I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father (Dillon)

Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul!
 
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My name will be sally, usless i can think of something better
 
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i dont care what my name is, really. dillon.
 
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That's a silly name.
 
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as silly as paul? at least have some imagination!
 
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But Paul rhymes with so many words.
 
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WTF is a background character? D:

My name shall be..... Ashley.
 
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tina...err ashley can be my babysitter xD
 
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QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 15 2006, 11:40 AM) *
tina...err ashley can be my babysitter xD

Little sister will grow up to be a slut like me! rofl1.gif
 
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haha.
ashley: come on sally we're going to a rave
sally: whats that
ashley: it's err um.....a, a, a--birthday party!
sally: who's going to be there?
ashley: Oh no one just samatha's boyfriend--er i mean (insert name here)
paul: ashley, you're such a slut
sally: ashley is so cool can i be a slut too??
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idk something like that
 
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QUOTE(tic tac. @ Apr 15 2006, 1:34 PM) *
WTF is a background character? D:

My name shall be..... Ashley.


A character who isn't in the family itself.

All these little jokes are cool, but what should be the storyline for the first episode?
 
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wacko.gif I thought I was Steffie's sister.
 
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yea me too, for the first episode maybe it's like the being of the school year or the beginning of summer?
 
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So far we have got:

skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter (Sally)
My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter
robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality.
marzipan= Crazy Grandmother (Mae)
Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother (Paul)
POSSIBLY Eddie as a father
tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco)
Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother
I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father (Dillon)

Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul!
^ Characters name will be Hellena.

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yea me too, for the first episode maybe it's like the being of the school year or the beginning of summer?
^ I like the idea of during the summer better. It has a more interesting twist to it. You can make all this stuff happen and then add how it effects them while they're in school
 
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good idea. so how would the first episode start?
 
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Introducing the violent father and what he does to his kids?
 
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you mean him abusing them?
who should be abused at the beginning?
sure ok so it'd be something like this
daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name
dad: get over here!
one of the daughters: oh daddy please
dad: i said get your ass over here!
one of the daughters: (tries to run away)
dad: grabs her and starts beating her
mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down)
dad: get off me! (punches mother)
one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy cry.gif
DAD: SHUT UP.
one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help )
by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone
 
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^ Hm...that would be great. Prologue anyone? Introducing the characters and how the father came to be crazy.
 
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you mean him abusing them?
who should be abused at the beginning?
sure ok so it'd be something like this
daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name
dad: get over here!
one of the daughters: oh daddy please
dad: i said get your ass over here!
one of the daughters: (tries to run away)
dad: grabs her and starts beating her
mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down)
dad: get off me! (punches mother)
one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy cry.gif
DAD: SHUT UP.
one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help )
by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone

dillon drives (i can drive, apparently) them to the hospital, where the family covers up how the mom go thurt
 
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James: good idea......it was terrible, dear mother was coming down the stairs and all the sudden she tripped, she came rolling down and got severly injured, daddy was mad because he had left his books on the stairs, which caused her to trip, and drove off, guilty and afraid he would accuse her, but of course mother knew it was not on purpose.

Jane: the father is an alchoholic, that's why he is crazy

cast:we need to decide who is being abused in the first scene
 
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^ Ah yes...should we include a reason why he started to drink?

I think we should have...one of the twins being abuse. This should make it interesting since both of them feel the pain but only one of them is being abused while the other is watching.

Since this is already in progress, do you think the Createblog Family should have a more organized topic in the writing forum, with the roles of each cBer and the storyline. It would be a good place to discuss the episodes.
 
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jane: his work was hard, so he just would try to drink his problems away. ok, you and robb have to work that out. that's a good idea, except it would have to be so only cast and *crew* can view it than after wards we make a new thread which would be like: cB family episode: 1 and make it open to the public
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perhaps this should have a different name this isn't in anyway related to cB unless they write about it on createblog or something ermm.gif
 
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^ This is when I wish I had moderator powers to go "backstage". I guess we'd all have to discuss it over AIM or in a chatroom before making it into an official thread. I still think we need a catchier title. ph34r.gif
 
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i just said that in my edit but you beat me to it, we should pm one of the mods about, and since paul thought of it maybe he should om one wink.gif
 
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I also think that Paul should be the one to make the first thread. But we just need to have everything organized.

Here's the characters:
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Steffie (Skp86): Sally - 6 Year Old Daughter.
Jane (My Cinderella.): Hellena - 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter.
Robbie (robb0): (Name not yet decided) - Twin of Hellena similar personality.
Krista (marzipan): Crazy Grandmother.
Paul (Paul M. is Baaack): Paul - Annoying 12 year old brother
(POSSIBLY Eddie as a father)
Tina (tic tac): (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends Hellena and (Undecided) and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons.
(tahco_monster): Francesco - Family dog
Yen (Blow Don't Suck): Angry mother
James (I Shot JFK): (Background Character) Dillon - Corruptive boyfriend of Hellena, (Undecided twin) is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade Dillon to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father.


Storyline?
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4 children and their disturbed parents are living under one chaotic household. Hellena knows more than she should. (Undecided Twin Name) wishes she was never born. Sally is trapped between pressure from her sibling and her parents, and Paul tries his best to stay out of the wrath of his parents, but into the annoyance of his siblings. This horror-comedy is filled with laughs and suspense as the family meets and befriends new people. Along with Krista, the family's favorite and coocoo grandmother Mae who puts the fun in funny.
 
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NOTE: dillon also tries his best to help the family through their troubles.

but before we do paul should pm a mod but most likely an admin since they have that ability i beleive so it can be private.
 
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What do you think of the storyline? ^ It's up there.
 
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^remember my name is sally, and krista's name is grandma mae wink.gif
i think it's a good storyline, you made it a bit happier which is good =)
but we still need it either
a)have a new name
or
b)make it have something to do with cB
 
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The Createblog parody?
 
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parody? huh?
 
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I'm not sure, it was the first thing that came to mind. Parody is usually something like scary movie 1,2,3,4. So scratch that...a walk in my shoes?
 
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isn't that already a show?
 
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...Chaotic Createblog.
 
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that sounds good =)
 
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Now then...we need to discuss this with the crew.
 
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do we really need a crew?
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last chance to apply;;you can only be a boy since we have too many girls at this point, please tell us what you want your name to be and your character (ex:brother, neighbor, cousin, boyfriend,etc) or you can apply for crew......like an idea person;;someone who gives us ideas for episodes and whatever
 
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i'm gonna drop out. someone else can be grandma. i just don't really feel like doing this anymore....sry!

nvm i'll do it. i can't make up my mind!

QUOTE(skp86 @ Apr 15 2006, 4:21 PM) *
you mean him abusing them?
who should be abused at the beginning?
sure ok so it'd be something like this
daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name
dad: get over here!
one of the daughters: oh daddy please
dad: i said get your ass over here!
one of the daughters: (tries to run away)
dad: grabs her and starts beating her
mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down)
dad: get off me! (punches mother)
one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy cry.gif
DAD: SHUT UP.
one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help )
by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone


omg, that's way too brutal for me. cry.gif _unsure.gif i'd rather not do that.
 
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^you're the grandma you'll live
 
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You're supposed to be the comic relief!
 
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yea, make jokes, like your mother is such a coward that she says moo get it cow-ard? [/cheesy joke]
 
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why IS this still in feedback?
 
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^because a mod hasn't moved it to writing?
 
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Hmmm, all is looking good so far, I'll just take everything so far, put it on Microsoft Word, then post it when it's finalized.
 
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okay =)
 

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