Createblog Family, ***Internet written T.V show*** |
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Well, I think this could prove to be an exciting concept. Createblog members roleplaying to make a mini-series.
Createblog members apply for a part in this little show, and put together a monthly episode. The show will be quite similar to "The Simpsons", or even "Family Guy", in which it is a show about a family, with a mother, father, son and daughter making up the episodes. Also, feel free to apply for a seperate part, in which you could create your own character, and they add a nice background character to the show. Storylines can be pitched in by anybody, and the best way at the end of around a one week period will be chosen to be the months episode. Once the storyline for the episode has been chosen, the charcters themselves can talk amongst each other, either in the thread, in PM's, or on a live chat, and put all their jokes, drama, quotes and any other ideas together to form one funny, or dramatic, or what everelse, kind of show. What do you say? |
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
well.......it's an interesting idea! although i don't understand how we would make it a TV show
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Yeah, it's more just the basic concept of a TV show, and the script is posted, but the actual being on TV part...doesn't...happen...yeah...
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
yeah, i know it wouldn't be a TV show, so it would be more of a story?
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In script form.
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*My Cinderella.* |
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This sounds like an entertaining idea. I wouldn't mind create my own character and entertaining others.
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Then please, give it a shot!
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urhm, im happy to ty it out, if someone else wants to organize the how and where
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This thread, randomly blurt out your ideas.
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... are you talking about somewhat .... fanfiction contest or just fanfiction?
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haha sounds interesting to me =)
i apply to be the clueless 6 year old daughter named sally who constantly over hears her sibling's PG13/R rated conversations ![]() |
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I apply to be the quiet/violent and suicidal older daughter, who hates her family because she knows more than she's supposed to.
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HAHAHAha. wierdo !!
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I apply to be the quiet/violent and suicidal older daughter, who hates her family because she knows more than she's supposed to. ![]() now you are my sister jane. and i over hear your conversations. hehehe. i could be like mommy what does suicide mean? and whoever plays the mom would scream what the _ _ _ _?!?! and the dad is cheating on the mom and........oh i'm so in to this. |
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
i apply to be the middle sister who is a goody-two-shoes and always gets in the middle of things between her suicidal sister and the younger 6 year old. OH! hehe this could be fun!
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yay krista too!
now we need a preppy brother who we all despise ![]() yen should be in this, bu i don't know what she could be. |
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
which guy?
HAHA yen could be the short-tempered mom |
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now you are my sister jane. and i over hear your conversations. hehehe. i could be like mommy what does suicide mean? and whoever plays the mom would scream what the _ _ _ _?!?! and the dad is cheating on the mom and........oh i'm so in to this. ^ woo hoo i got a little sisterNow...we need a mummie. |
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Hm, interesting.. I just don't know what character I should be..
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*My Cinderella.* |
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^ HA! Good one.
We need someone to have an affair with our dad. |
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who is our dad?
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^ For some reason, I see Eddie.
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who's your daddy? [/lame line]
lol. eddie could be an alcoholic who is cheating on his wife with tina....who beats all of his daughters, that's why jane wants to commit suicide and the 6 year old umm carries her blanket everywhere (idk..) and krista tries to be as good as possible so she won't be beaten. .....i should write soap operas |
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
who's your daddy? [/lame line] lol. eddie could be an alcoholic who is cheating on his wife with tina....who beats all of his daughters, that's why jane wants to commit suicide and the 6 year old umm carries her blanket everywhere (idk..) and krista tries to be as good as possible so she won't be beaten. .....i should right soap operas haha. i think that's a little intense for me. lets make it more humorous!! |
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^ Sounds like a good idea. I'm the one who knows that he's cheating. Which is why I think it's so sad. Poor Sally. This story reminds me of this...
QUOTE She was mad again, I could tell by the fire that flickered in her eyes. She grabbed the back of my shirt collared and rammed my head into the coffee table. "PLEASE! MUMMY! I BEG YOU! STOP! IM SORRY, MUMMY!" She ignored my desperate cries and continued to ram my head. I was shaking. I didn't know what to do. I never did. This is how it had always been in my family. Papa died not too long ago, and for that my mummy always hated me. I never understood what I could've done to make her hate me so bad. I loved her to death, and I melted when I saw her eyes fill with hatred --toward me, and only me. Except we can make it into the dad's perspective. |
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you're right krista, it has to be about cB....
but i love you're idea jane! |
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^ And guess who's the one who gets abuseeeedddd.
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MOM?!?! Noo. Can I be the slutty teenage girl? Haha.
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Yeah, sure. Why not go for 5 daughters?! Haha.
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What about a manly brother who tries to help his sisters, but dies shortly because he got hit in the head with a bottle of vodka.
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but but but mommy where did (insert brother's name here) go?? mommy i want (insert brothers name here)
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What should the brother's name be? Something...manly.
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Ok, ok. Can I be the cool young aunt then? Haha
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^ What role would she play as an aunt though?
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^ Much similar to my role. Let's be twins.
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![]() Krista. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Member Posts: 4,380 Joined: Apr 2006 Member No: 391,319 ![]() |
jeez! there's gonna be a lot of daughters. someone has to be the wacko schitzophrenic grandma. OMG that would be hilarious. a grandma randomly comes into the house looking for her dentures. lol
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^
Grandma: "Melina, dear. Have you seen my teeth" Becka: Grandma, my name is Becka... |
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*My Cinderella.* |
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A Createblog Parody?
A Kodak Moment? Tall tale heart. |
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*My Cinderella.* |
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^
![]() I was thinking for my character to be named Helena (Hell-ena). |
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*tahco_monster* |
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ME = FAMILY DOG NAMED FRANCHESCO
haha or however you spell it |
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^ With powers that can read minds!
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i'll be a corruptive borther/boyfriend/friend influence who appears to cause trouble for the daughters and lead them into unfortunate situations
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yay krista too! now we need a preppy brother who we all despise ![]() I think I can fit into that category. So far we have got: skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality. marzipan= Crazy Grandmother Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother POSSIBLY Eddie as a father tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco) Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul! |
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I think I can fit into that category. So far we have got: skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality. marzipan= Crazy Grandmother Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother POSSIBLY Eddie as a father tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco) I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the twins, hated by the father and hates the father Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul! ahem... why am i the boyfriend of both twins? |
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^ yeah! please yen?
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Ooh. Helena and Hyena. Lol, totally kidding. Hmm... ^ Whenever I think of the name Helena, I think of the name Hermia from A Midsummer Night's dream.francesco I think I can fit into that category. So far we have got: skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality. marzipan= Crazy Grandmother Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother POSSIBLY Eddie as a father tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderella and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco) I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the twins, hated by the father and hates the father Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul! Wow our father must be a sex machine... |
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^my grandpa had more kids than that.
I'll be the mother...if we had that much kids imagine how active we could be... |
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mommy what does lesbian mean?
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So far we have got:
skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter (Sally) My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality. marzipan= Crazy Grandmother (Mae) Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother (Paul) POSSIBLY Eddie as a father tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco) Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father (Dillon) Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul! |
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My name will be sally, usless i can think of something better
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i dont care what my name is, really. dillon.
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That's a silly name.
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as silly as paul? at least have some imagination!
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But Paul rhymes with so many words.
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WTF is a background character? D:
My name shall be..... Ashley. |
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tina...err ashley can be my babysitter xD
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haha.
ashley: come on sally we're going to a rave sally: whats that ashley: it's err um.....a, a, a--birthday party! sally: who's going to be there? ashley: Oh no one just samatha's boyfriend--er i mean (insert name here) paul: ashley, you're such a slut sally: ashley is so cool can i be a slut too?? ![]() idk something like that |
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yea me too, for the first episode maybe it's like the being of the school year or the beginning of summer?
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So far we have got: ^ Characters name will be Hellena.skp86= 6 Year Old Daughter (Sally) My Cinderella.= 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter robb0 = Twin of My Cinderlla, same personality. marzipan= Crazy Grandmother (Mae) Paul M. is Baaack= Annoying 12 year old brother (Paul) POSSIBLY Eddie as a father tic tac= (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends My Cinderlla and robb0 and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. tahco_monster= Family dog (Francesco) Blow Don't Suck= Angry mother I Shot JFK= (Background Character) Corruptive boyfriend of the MyCinderlla, robb0 is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade I Shot JFK to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father (Dillon) Confirm your characters names, I'll be...oh, I know, Paul! QUOTE yea me too, for the first episode maybe it's like the being of the school year or the beginning of summer? ^ I like the idea of during the summer better. It has a more interesting twist to it. You can make all this stuff happen and then add how it effects them while they're in school
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good idea. so how would the first episode start?
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Introducing the violent father and what he does to his kids?
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you mean him abusing them?
who should be abused at the beginning? sure ok so it'd be something like this daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name dad: get over here! one of the daughters: oh daddy please dad: i said get your ass over here! one of the daughters: (tries to run away) dad: grabs her and starts beating her mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down) dad: get off me! (punches mother) one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy ![]() DAD: SHUT UP. one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help ) by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone |
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^ Hm...that would be great. Prologue anyone? Introducing the characters and how the father came to be crazy.
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you mean him abusing them? who should be abused at the beginning? sure ok so it'd be something like this daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name dad: get over here! one of the daughters: oh daddy please dad: i said get your ass over here! one of the daughters: (tries to run away) dad: grabs her and starts beating her mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down) dad: get off me! (punches mother) one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy ![]() DAD: SHUT UP. one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help ) by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone dillon drives (i can drive, apparently) them to the hospital, where the family covers up how the mom go thurt |
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James: good idea......it was terrible, dear mother was coming down the stairs and all the sudden she tripped, she came rolling down and got severly injured, daddy was mad because he had left his books on the stairs, which caused her to trip, and drove off, guilty and afraid he would accuse her, but of course mother knew it was not on purpose.
Jane: the father is an alchoholic, that's why he is crazy cast:we need to decide who is being abused in the first scene |
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^ Ah yes...should we include a reason why he started to drink?
I think we should have...one of the twins being abuse. This should make it interesting since both of them feel the pain but only one of them is being abused while the other is watching. Since this is already in progress, do you think the Createblog Family should have a more organized topic in the writing forum, with the roles of each cBer and the storyline. It would be a good place to discuss the episodes. |
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jane: his work was hard, so he just would try to drink his problems away. ok, you and robb have to work that out. that's a good idea, except it would have to be so only cast and *crew* can view it than after wards we make a new thread which would be like: cB family episode: 1 and make it open to the public
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^ This is when I wish I had moderator powers to go "backstage". I guess we'd all have to discuss it over AIM or in a chatroom before making it into an official thread. I still think we need a catchier title.
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i just said that in my edit but you beat me to it, we should pm one of the mods about, and since paul thought of it maybe he should om one
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I also think that Paul should be the one to make the first thread. But we just need to have everything organized.
Here's the characters: QUOTE Steffie (Skp86): Sally - 6 Year Old Daughter. Jane (My Cinderella.): Hellena - 16 Year old, suicidal, parent-hating daughter. Robbie (robb0): (Name not yet decided) - Twin of Hellena similar personality. Krista (marzipan): Crazy Grandmother. Paul (Paul M. is Baaack): Paul - Annoying 12 year old brother (POSSIBLY Eddie as a father) Tina (tic tac): (Background character) Slutty teenager, around 16, befriends Hellena and (Undecided) and tries to turn her into evil 16 year old demons. (tahco_monster): Francesco - Family dog Yen (Blow Don't Suck): Angry mother James (I Shot JFK): (Background Character) Dillon - Corruptive boyfriend of Hellena, (Undecided twin) is jealous of this, and often tried to persuade Dillon to "come to her side". He is hated by the father and hates the father. Storyline? QUOTE 4 children and their disturbed parents are living under one chaotic household. Hellena knows more than she should. (Undecided Twin Name) wishes she was never born. Sally is trapped between pressure from her sibling and her parents, and Paul tries his best to stay out of the wrath of his parents, but into the annoyance of his siblings. This horror-comedy is filled with laughs and suspense as the family meets and befriends new people. Along with Krista, the family's favorite and coocoo grandmother Mae who puts the fun in funny.
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NOTE: dillon also tries his best to help the family through their troubles.
but before we do paul should pm a mod but most likely an admin since they have that ability i beleive so it can be private. |
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What do you think of the storyline? ^ It's up there.
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^remember my name is sally, and krista's name is grandma mae
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The Createblog parody?
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parody? huh?
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I'm not sure, it was the first thing that came to mind. Parody is usually something like scary movie 1,2,3,4. So scratch that...a walk in my shoes?
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isn't that already a show?
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that sounds good =)
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Now then...we need to discuss this with the crew.
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do we really need a crew?
edit// last chance to apply;;you can only be a boy since we have too many girls at this point, please tell us what you want your name to be and your character (ex:brother, neighbor, cousin, boyfriend,etc) or you can apply for crew......like an idea person;;someone who gives us ideas for episodes and whatever |
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nvm i'll do it. i can't make up my mind! you mean him abusing them? who should be abused at the beginning? sure ok so it'd be something like this daddy just got back from the bar again, i could tell he had a tough day at work, so i hid. oh i was so scared. why didn't he love me? why does he hate me so much?? oh no i hear he calling my name dad: get over here! one of the daughters: oh daddy please dad: i said get your ass over here! one of the daughters: (tries to run away) dad: grabs her and starts beating her mom: (walks in) (tries to calm dad down) dad: get off me! (punches mother) one of the daughters: mommmmyyyyy ![]() DAD: SHUT UP. one of the daughters: (runs away to dillon's house hoping he can help ) by the time she got back her mom was lying on the floor with blood all over and her dad's car was gone omg, that's way too brutal for me. ![]() ![]() |
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^you're the grandma you'll live
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You're supposed to be the comic relief!
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yea, make jokes, like your mother is such a coward that she says moo get it cow-ard? [/cheesy joke]
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why IS this still in feedback?
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^because a mod hasn't moved it to writing?
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Hmmm, all is looking good so far, I'll just take everything so far, put it on Microsoft Word, then post it when it's finalized.
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okay =)
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