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Fading away, in the view of a toy
*My Cinderella.*
post Mar 31 2006, 12:27 PM
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How lonely it is, with no one to play
I'm slowly catching dust with each passing day
I remember when, best friend used to play with me
but now she is gone, how could this be
I remember like yesterday, her grin was delightful
but now it's disappeared behind drugs, how spiteful
This is so sad, to watch my best friend die
If my painted eyes were real, for her I would cry
I miss her so much, but now she is gone
away doing drugs, with debbie and ron
Oh how I wish, her mother was still there
to help her see, this I cannot bear
Her once beautiful face, is now hidden in wrinkles
and her eyes no longer sparkle or give off that twinkle
Please best friend, come back and play
I no longer want to watch you slowly dying every day...
 
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post Mar 31 2006, 12:30 PM
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it rhymesss XD
the poem reflects off how everything is now.
with all the drugs and what not going on. I like it (;
gives a sense of reality.
 
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post Mar 31 2006, 09:06 PM
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^ Thanks Jue flowers.gif
 
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post Mar 31 2006, 09:15 PM
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it's cool, but sad. reminds me of toy story lol
 
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post Apr 1 2006, 12:23 PM
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^ I never realized that. laugh.gif
 

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