Night Walk, --Written in history too =D Options

[IceCream4U]

Sleeping dreams of candy canes,
I open my eyes.
The silence of nothing,
I creep downstairs.

I wonder outside to the night
The color of life had turned dark as black
Everything seemed so dull,
I lied down onto the cold dirt.

I could feel the earth breathing,
My eyes were burning with the cold
That bright bulb in the sky
Took all my fears away.

I take special attention
To each grain of dirt
Every groove in the uneven soil,
Suprisingly soft as silk.

I never want to get up
Its heaven here.
But I saw something even more peaceful-
That shining pool of glass.

I step into my little rowboat
Put my hands on the paddle, just right.
I take off,
The wrinkling water looks so inviting.

As I strip down,
The bitter cold bites my skin
But I feel so perfect in the water.
I can't help but swim.

I duck my head under the silky sheet
The water flutters above my head.
I feel every inch of water delicately touch my fingers,
And everything is alright.

I come back onto short,
And float back home.
Glide on up the stars,
And rest my head on my feather-soft pillow.

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This is cute. It really made me wanna go to sleep (:

[edit]

Ah, that sounded mean. I meant it made me wanna go to sleep 'cause it seemed peaceful (: Haha, I didn't mean the other way.

[KissMe2408]

aww :) I love this!
So sweet, ... dreamy. It makes me feel younger,
I want to grab a cookie, climb into my pajamas and read a story or something haha.
You have a nice way of getting the reader to visualize the scene as well. Wonderful! I'm a fan :)

[IceCream4U]

^^AH! I have a fan. Yay! =D

[xstab.my.heartx]

it's good.