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We're in heaven, complete....kind of
Stephire
post Mar 11 2006, 11:41 PM
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I was initially going to have a girl and a guy together on a cloud, but now that I've finished her I don't feel so gung ho about adding a guy anymore.
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She's loosely based on Mamimi off Fooly Cooly.


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post Mar 11 2006, 11:44 PM
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i like the head. this is cute! but her left foot looks kind of weird. 2 of the toes do. what is she holding?
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:48 PM
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A gameboy.

Which two toes?
On the left her toes are supposed to be curling.
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:52 PM
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Aww thats soo cute
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:52 PM
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It's weird how on one foot, the toes are spread out and on the other, they're bunched together. wink.gif And the section of her shirt (under her boobs) looks a tad out of place. Just how winkled it is... zipped.gif Is that a gameboy color? Because she's holding it the wrong way for any type after. And only gameboy colors came in a shade similar to that. Yeah. Sorry.
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:53 PM
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QUOTE(Stephire @ Mar 11 2006, 10:48 PM) *
A gameboy.

Which two toes?
On the left her toes are supposed to be curling.


oh. ok. nvm. hehe.

it's cute!
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:54 PM
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that's cute, but her boobs are kind of weird.


when i saw the title of this, i thought it would have some ties to DJ Sammy's Heaven.
 
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post Mar 11 2006, 11:57 PM
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QUOTE(fishcake-y @ Mar 11 2006, 10:52 PM) *
It's weird how on one foot, the toes are spread out and on the other, they're bunched together. wink.gif And the section of her shirt (under her boobs) looks a tad out of place. Just how winkled it is... zipped.gif Is that a gameboy color? Because she's holding it the wrong way for any type after. And only gameboy colors came in a shade similar to that. Yeah. Sorry.


She's just holding it, not playing it. It's a gameboy advance.
I was sort of winging it on her underboob/boob area. XD
In my fantasy world gameboys come in every color. (:
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 12:19 AM
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It's really cute. I like her eyes the most. Um, the chests look kinda pointy. When I saw this title I thought of my teacher's singing. blink.gif
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 04:20 AM
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Mamimi<3

Anyway, like said, the toes look broken.
And gameboys in every colour?

=( why can't it be so?!!!?!
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 10:24 AM
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Wow everything looks great =]
The only things that bug me is the shading of the sun and her feet-they're so big!
Everything else is fantastic!
You should be one of those japanese cartoonists!
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 11:06 AM
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toes are a bit weird like said above, the eyes and hair are pretty great,nice colors and great job.
 
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i looks ok, i just don't like the outlining.
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 02:36 PM
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it looks cool..howd u do it? on a wacom tablet?
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 05:19 PM
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i like it so far.... but for me the sun and the clouds does not work on dat.... and yup.. the boobs are wierd... but u r still finishing the hair right?

wel, i cant wait till its finish.... happy.gif great job so far...
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 07:35 PM
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It looks really cool. The feet looks really big, though.
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 07:49 PM
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how did you do that?

is that a vector? its amazing, but the lines are sort of choppy...
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 07:55 PM
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^It's a vexel.
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i like it so far.... but for me the sun and the clouds does not work on dat.... and yup.. the boobs are wierd... but u r still finishing the hair right?

wel, i cant wait till its finish.... great job so far...


Hair is completely finished. :/ My favorite part is the sun and clouds, :p.

The feet are big because they're supposed to be closer, I guess using porportion in art isn't cool any more?

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Wow everything looks great =]
The only things that bug me is the shading of the sun and her feet-they're so big!
Everything else is fantastic!
You should be one of those japanese cartoonists!

LOL! If only I were japanese, :(.
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 08:46 PM
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i mean like a person who makes the japanese cartoons
 
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post Mar 12 2006, 09:16 PM
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Will you people use correct terminology please? Mangaka being a Japanese cartoonist. Drawer of manga. Not graphic novels or whatever you people call them here. x.X Sorry, but it sorta bothers me. Like when people say sa-KI because it's sa-keh.
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Hair is completely finished. :/ My favorite part is the sun and clouds, :p.

The feet are big because they're supposed to be closer, I guess using porportion in art isn't cool any more?
The sun and clouds... Remind me of the sky in the first Pokemon movie. -waits for crickets- Yeah. Proportions in art are cool. It's a little harder to portray in vexel (vector, whatever) art. At least usually.
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The left foot looks a little too big. I don't think the font quite fits either. But other all, it's very cute.
 
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