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Johnny, who lives in a box., quite odd.
radhikaeatsraman
post Mar 4 2006, 08:47 PM
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oooh yeah.
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Johnny, Who Lives in a Box.
By: Radhika

Little Johnny, who lives in a box,
He can't get in, he can't get out,
Trapped in a hole, he loses his mind,
Silently suffering all through his life.

Little Johnny, not so little now,
This box, far too big, much too suffocating,
No light shines through, the look of terror,
Upon his face, he bears.

Then one day he realizes,
Living in a box,
He got himself in, and he must get out,
This box is an illusion, a mime he has become.

(C/C, por favor. I haven't written in a long time.)
 
*ranniel*
post Mar 5 2006, 12:18 AM
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That's funny. It's good. _smile.gif
 
*Blow_Don't_SUCK*
post Mar 5 2006, 12:21 AM
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That was deep. It made me think of the story it was trying to tell. Was this Johnny trapped in something he got in? Or was he born into it, forever suffering? Really good poem, I love it.
 

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