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 Feb 22 2006, 11:32 PM
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 yay for hugs :)  Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872  |
http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c301/ros...sic/imyours.png
yes so ive been addicted to "im yours" by jason mraz for TOO LONG. but it makes me happy and kind of lonely  k anyway constructive critisism please  <33 rosy ::editted:  better? i hope 
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Feb 22 2006, 11:40 PM
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Newbie Group: Member Posts: 7 Joined: Feb 2006 Member No: 380,340 |
its really nice except the purple outline kinda ruins the whole thing cuz like, its kinda an elegant background and then the purple makes the people stand out a little tooooo much. but its still really nice.
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Feb 22 2006, 11:52 PM
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 the name is ada. Group: Official Member Posts: 4,688 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,608 |
The purple ruin`s it.
Maybe make it blue? so it matches the background? well it`s still cute! |
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Feb 23 2006, 12:02 AM
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 Lurker. Group: Official Designer Posts: 2,161 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,851 |
I agree with those above me, I don't really like the purple/pink outline. It's also a little jagged, I think it'll like much nicer if it was smooth. other than that, I love the whole concept and everything else about it. Great job. :]
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Feb 23 2006, 09:58 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 7,149 Joined: Aug 2005 Member No: 213,509 |
the outline should be a different color and maybe add a nice border? same for the font stroke color.great though
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Feb 23 2006, 04:04 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 3,055 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 174,796 |
QUOTE(*clara* @ Feb 22 2006, 11:40 PM)  its really nice except the purple outline kinda ruins the whole thing cuz like, its kinda an elegant background and then the purple makes the people stand out a little tooooo much. but its still really nice. Took the words outta my mouth |
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Feb 23 2006, 04:24 PM
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 Watch This Group: Member Posts: 886 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 118,408 |
the outline needs to be less rigid
otherwise its good cool idea!!! |
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Feb 23 2006, 04:30 PM
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RJL<3 Group: Member Posts: 1,194 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,019 |
they dont have feet
 but i likee. i may go listen to that song now.. lol. seriously though. i'd like to see it w/out the purple.
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Feb 23 2006, 04:35 PM
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 when you smile, i melt inside Group: Member Posts: 1,325 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 267,089 |
QUOTE(*clara* @ Feb 22 2006, 11:40 PM) its really nice except the purple outline kinda ruins the whole thing cuz like, its kinda an elegant background and then the purple makes the people stand out a little tooooo much. but its still really nice. I agree. great job. |
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Feb 23 2006, 04:38 PM
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 Bada-bing, bada-boom. Group: Member Posts: 452 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 86,111 |
Like they all said, it's the outline and the feet.
But other than that I love it. :D |
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Feb 23 2006, 05:41 PM
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 Milo Kamalani Group: Human Posts: 954 Joined: Oct 2005 Member No: 274,798 |
Awww, I think that's really cute.
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Feb 24 2006, 12:06 PM
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yay for hugs :) Group: Member Posts: 132 Joined: Apr 2005 Member No: 126,872 |
thanks for all the constructive critisism :) i editted the photo a bit but i dont know what to do about the feet cus their feet were in the sand
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Feb 24 2006, 03:01 PM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,584 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,748 |
oo..very cool idea..but i think the ppl still stand out a bit too much..maybe lower the opacity? and about the feet..maybe to make it look like theyre standing in something...just draw a blue line where theyre feet meets the background. hope that works =]
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