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 Feb 20 2006, 06:44 PM
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she walks in between the sunlights rays
she never wants to show her face her first impression is always grade B only cause she hides what they should never see but when she opens up herself to you a wreck, surviving, only one of the few whats she hiding, whats she hiding ill never surrender to your prying and even though shes loved, living an artificial life this is not what she wants, she has to continue to hide |
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Feb 20 2006, 09:52 PM
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I love it. It seems like you can make a song out of it. Keep up the good work.
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Feb 25 2006, 12:29 AM
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Woww....that describes exactly how I'm feeling...
Nice job - its beautifully written... || S | I | E | R | R | A || |
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Mar 1 2006, 08:15 PM
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This is the best poem AS OF NOW that I have read, I'm looking foward to read all your poems just like the great cB writters at createBlog. Not really the best, because I admit I've seen better, but your writting has indeed improved
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