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A NEW LAYOUT!(useing adive for the people that gave me tips), yeaa!!!
K1D
post Feb 19 2006, 07:36 AM
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iam really pround of my self for this simple,nice structure NO MUSIC OR ANNYOING POP-Ups just plain fresssssh :) what do ya think?? biggrin.gif
 
Elleusion
post Feb 19 2006, 11:02 AM
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This is so much better!

It takes a long time to load though, but I think that's freeweb's fault.

editt.
Ok, so I veiwed your source just to see how you were coding it, and the coding is very messy. You should look at the codes for some of the layouts on cB, and see how they are organized... With alittle work, I think you could code qite a nice site... And don't worry, you don't need to write your name over every graphic in the layout... it's not xanga, there aren't thousands of people of whom many want to steal your stuff... Oh, and about your top module, just write alittle about yourself, like the basics, then add a 'about me' page, and link that instead of telling them to IM you.
 
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post Feb 19 2006, 12:32 PM
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In my opinion you should:
- Change the links from the defualt color.
- Add a border around the header image and all the div content boxes. (white would be a good
color)
- Get rid of the arrows in the middle and maybe loose the background it also somewhat looks
weird since you can see were the background ends.
- Instead of writing "©..." on your layouts try writing the adress maybe in big text then in
smaller text writing th © thing.
Otherwise its better.
 
artislife90
post Feb 19 2006, 10:49 PM
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Okay, Im hoping (really I am) That this is a major code error and you didn't plan this site to look like this. I say that because, from what I see, a website to wide for even 1690x1500, which is a rather large resolution. For reference, this is what I (and from what I can tell others) see.


Okay, so lets go on the theory that the large image on the left SHOULD be behind your content.
Now, the first thing I dislike about the layout is the content, why the scroll bars? They are horribly annoying within a page, and since this page has nothing obstructing the content from expanding vertically to fit its text, why not? Why make the viewer scroll two scroll bars?
The next thing is your background image, its very busy. And, as see, if it repeats it looks really sloppy. You should want your site to present its content in a way that makes its content the focal point.
So, next is the design itself, I don't like it, its thrown together, custom shapes and a brush or two. You should work on your code, the work on developing a design.
Well then, here is the image with some badly drawn arrows.
(((Blue arrows denote things that should be expanded vertically. Red is stuff that I think should be removed, and green denotes that you need to move the background to the left.)))


Keep Trying, with a little work, you might get something.
 

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