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[rAwritsgWeg]

hey everyone i dont know if everyone remembers us posting about the creation of our game project nibelheim from last year but we have been working,working,working to get stuff out to u guys the reason im posting this is for an opinion on what you guys think about my work feel free to compliment or state things that u think would make it look better

Our Company Screen/Logo



People question the font but i sorta think it fits

The Title Screen(the name is not final but we are thinking of keeping it



The Name OF the game is Shadow Of Humanity

Please Comment!!!
Thanks

[*digital.fragrance*]

hmmm... something about the placing of the "Shadow of Humanity" Title bothers me. Maybe it should be central in the image, or perhaps towards the bottom. But I don't like it on the very top.

The graphics are awesome! Did you create all of that?

[xosteffanator]

Oh that is so cool!!!
I like how it's kind of 3D and abstract

[rAwritsgWeg]

ya i dont even like the name but my firends insited that it be on top(...............)

anywho thanks for the complimetns keep them coming

[add1cted2f1re]

O!! I WANNA PLAY!

how much for a demo and where will u be selling them?

[turbulent]

those are very well done, they all look awesome
but the give off the appearance of most other games out there. that is not necesarily a bad thing. in a sense it's cliche, but overall it is verypowerful and had a nice outcome. so things even out haha

i cant quite tell what your game is about, yo umight want to ad something to make that more specific. but once again, alot of games dont directly show that

so its up to you to decide what you're gonna do lol i guess this was a pretty pointless comment =)

[talcumpowder]

Is that katakana in the lower left of the gameshot? 'cause you need to clean up the quality if it is. I can't read it. And I don't like the font for "Shadow of Humanity". Not violent enough, Base 02 or Deadly English might be better...
The font colour on your logo is the thing that should be questioned. Too bright for the image in my opinion. Wrong colour too, since it's yellows and oranges in the image mostly.

[spoon_fork]

what kind of game is that? RPG?

hhmmm... "shadow of humanity"..... i think that means the other side of humanity, the evil side, right?

the images look great... what kind of program did u use by the way? 3dmax? maya? cinema4d? or others.....?

[m.ar.i.a]

i think they look great. like a game-ish way. i like the font for the 2nd one and.... is it just me or asre those two rocks look like an evil duck and a bear???

[maryissa]

haha, they also look like a duck and bear 2 me. lol. Nice Job.

[DrNick311]

Just out of curiosity - did you ask the guy for permission to use the 2nd one? (I've seen it on DeviantArt before, I know it isn't yours.)

[rAwritsgWeg]

um about hte demo its free and anyone who wants it jost post that u want it and ill get to u guys the day its out

but ya we should be revealing stuff in feb.



bye peoples ^_^

[PrincessAda]

Ohh wow they`re nice

[rAwritsgWeg]

Alrighty i have gotten permission to let out some stuff bout the game
heres the story that we will realease:
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26 yr old Raizen is a skilled assassin who is hired by King Lussius to kill the Krein Republic's leader. Before he receives this assignment, he went on a personal journey with his friend Kavary. They went looking foe the Nex Crown. Whomever held this crown was like a god. They realized that this might cause a dictator to rise, so they went to search for it together. They had told each other neither would use it for themselves, but to keep it out of the hands of someone who might. Anyway, on this assignment something happens that lands him in prison, and King Lussius, who he thought was his close friend, denies sending Raizen. He meets a female assassin in the prison and they escape together. Raizen vows to get to the bottom of things and thus his journey starts...

Alright this was originally a picture thread but niow its changing we really need help on this

we have been workin on it for almost a year
we need people who can scrpit ruby
need some concept artists(nightmare4taki we might want u back)
graphics design
story developement(to help make the stroy more involving(*plz note that is nothing close to the goodness of the story the story is much deeper we just had to put that up so the public could know more*)

anyways ill keep you posted on everything. if u help u will get major credit. if u want us to pay talk to me personally.

if anyone has any questions post in this thread
anyone has anything they think they can contribute also post in here

[MasterMind5823]

It's been awhile since my last post (as shown by my low post count). I am the project leader on this game. Thanks everyone on the feedback from the screens. We will take your criticism positively. Anyways, since it seems most people do not like the name, be aware that this name is a working title. I am 95% sure we will name it something else. As noted by the GFX leader who started this topic, we will release a demo at the end of Feb. so stay tuned in this topic. Later...

[spoon_fork]

wel, i have one thing to say.... can u be more unique? no offense but the story is kinda common (maybe because its a combination of some story games)... and is this RPG? and again the font is good but it will be great if u have ur own font right? (the "prime" one) wel, this is just what i want to say... no offense rely.....

[*mipadi*]

You're implementing it in Ruby?

[vash1530]

btw i another member of this team....names jeff and youve probably seen me in other threads....im working on writing the script for the story...chech this game out!!!

[vash1530]

i kno it sounds kind of corny but ive made recent changes (he has an old copy of the plot summary) so ill post it in a little while....

[MasterMind5823]

Yes this is an RPG, and we made it with RPG Maker XP. BTW, nice sig, Jeff...

[spoon_fork]

hey... can u show us one of the characters?

[MasterMind5823]

I would like to, but truth is, we are trying to get them custim made by a friend of ours, so ut will take a little while until I can show you anything besides the title screen. BUT, if you want to know more, click on my sig and you can read about the story and whatnot.