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snizzo
post Jan 23 2006, 01:45 PM
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one of my first vectors...havent made one in a while.

 
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post Jan 23 2006, 03:42 PM
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It looks ok but...
-The hair needs strands.
-the skin looks weird what's with the shading and then the weird outline?
-the lips could use a little bit of texture.
-The eyebrows looks just plain weird.
Good job on everything else though.
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 03:43 PM
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i like how everything has multiple layers [kinda] except the hair but I'd add a few more layers to the skin so it doesn't look too blocky.
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 03:57 PM
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i agree with them
it looks good
the eyebrows are a bit weird,maybe thats the way it is
add more layers to the skin like they said.
pretty good
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 04:57 PM
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i dont know much about vectoring but i hav seen better.... this one is pretty good too though. more layers are always (well, sometimes) a good thing :)
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 07:34 PM
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I like the hair color, but u should add strands to it. Its cool.
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 09:30 PM
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It`s nice! Love the skin color.
 
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post Jan 23 2006, 10:14 PM
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did you vector the skin? it looks really good, but im not sure if you juss posterized it lol. well when you vector stuff, try not to outline features. it doesnt look as good. simply use layers of shadows and highlights to define the features
 
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post Jan 24 2006, 11:00 AM
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yea i know it sucks lol, but remember it was only like my 3rd try. since i have learned that using gaussian blur is always great lol. and all that good stuff.

QUOTE(mizz_americaz @ Jan 23 2006, 7:14 PM)
did you vector the skin? it looks really good, but im not sure if you juss posterized it lol. well when you vector stuff, try not to outline features. it doesnt look as good. simply use layers of shadows and highlights to define the features
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oh yea and its all vectored. the skin i think came out ghey, like others said more layers needed. i will post up another as soon as im done with it.
 
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post Jan 24 2006, 05:11 PM
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um... yeah... for a 3rd try its alright...

but seriously; what were u thinking when u made the hair a gradient? that looks just plain silly

and i PRAY u DIDNT merge the layers and u can still go back and fix it
 
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post Jan 24 2006, 06:17 PM
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nope i dont even have it anymore i deleted it. its old since then i have faced the fact that i suck with illustrator...currently making one. maybe my last though.
 
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post Jan 24 2006, 06:21 PM
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why are u using illustrator?

use photoshop or PSP
 
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post Jan 24 2006, 08:00 PM
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because illustrator is easier to make vectors, atleast for me....i could never get it right in ps.
 

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