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| *not_your_average* |
 Jan 15 2006, 01:24 PM
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"The Hole."
As I walk into this cold, ruthless cell, the feeling washes over me again; my life, taking an ugly turn as someone shoves me in and locks me up. I search for things to do while I spend what seems like forever in here; I throw the coin and try to find my toy in the darkness. Insanity is slowly setting in; Even the loudest of my sobs go unheard. Nothing can save me now. |
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Jan 15 2006, 10:28 PM
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 Yawn  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
wow, very interesting.
I wish there was more to read! lol I really like your writing tho :) so keep doing it! |
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| *not_your_average* |
Jan 16 2006, 11:24 AM
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Thank you. I was going out somewhere right after that, so I couldn't write anymore.
I got my inspiration from my trip to Alcatraz, which is how I got the idea. |
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| *not_your_average* |
Jan 18 2006, 09:37 PM
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BUMP.
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| *chaneun* |
Jan 21 2006, 02:06 AM
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tks tsk double poster.
but.. if your walking into a cell, how is it a hole? o_o its well written, anyway. |
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Jan 21 2006, 02:44 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
The hole is a term often used to define solitary confinement.
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| *not_your_average* |
Jan 22 2006, 01:32 PM
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Christine, you've never been to Alcatraz, have you? Mmm. I'lol have to assume that.
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