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[Bobblehead425]

My Rainbow

To me you're a rainbow
A depressing colurful rainbow
the object of the storm
everyone enjoys;
but me.
Why not?
Because I can't reach you
can't grab you
can't touch you.
Unlike the rain,
It let's my senses free,
I can feel the wet
I can taste the wet,
I can hear the wet,
I can smell the wet,
I can love the wet;
But you're too far away darling,
I cannot feel you
I cannot hear you,
And yet,
How can I love you, still?
If I can't feel you?
I can't feel you
But I sure
can feel
for you.
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A Hole.

My feelings are kept
in a blank deep hole
and I'm falling inside
I'm falling inside
deeply inside
of this dark lovely hole
dark and lovely
a dark lovely hole.
My love is kept hidden
in an empty black ditch
I am falling inside
falling deeply inside
of this empty black ditch
an empty black ditch
empty and black
black and empty ditch.
I am hidden inside
of a dark lovely shadow
an emptied and blackened
dark lovely shadow.
An empty black hole
A dark lovely ditch,
An empty black
lovely dark
life of a lie.

[*mipadi*]

I like the use of symbolism, especially in the metaphor of the rainbow.