a scene at a urinal, from an unfinished script |
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| *mipadi* |
 Jan 6 2006, 01:16 AM
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Just a short scene from a script I started, but never quite finished. The one character, Max, has transferred to a new school, and has made a new friend, who is finally warming up to him.
INT. RESTROOM MAX and CONOR are standing at the urinals. Conor (after a pause of silence) Y'know, Max, I think I'm gonna like you. MAXWELL Well, that's good to know. CONOR Yeah. I mean, you're all quiet and shit. You don't talk my ear off when I'm pissing. MAXWELL Well, you're wel— CONOR (continuing on) I mean, some guys, they just talk and talk at the urinals—like a chick, y'know? Why, I bet if girls had urinals, they'd be in here all day, talkin' and talkin'. MAXWELL Yes. (zips fly and goes to sink) CONOR Hey, where ya goin'? (follows) MAXWELL Wash my hands. CONOR What? Aw, hell, dude, we don't need any o' that pissy British hygiene shit around here. Hell, real men don't wash their hands after they take a piss! MAXWELL I guess I'm not a "real man," then. (finishes washing) CONOR Aw, hell. (follows Maxwell out, calling after him:) You Brits don't even brush your damn teeth, for God's sake! CUT TO: (Apologies for format glitches. BB code is not conducive to formatting screenplays.) |
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Jan 6 2006, 11:43 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
lol. it amused me.
but dont call him maxwell. |
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Jan 6 2006, 06:04 PM
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 My desperate heart is far too weak to run for you this long. Group: Member Posts: 640 Joined: Jun 2005 Member No: 150,342 |
haha maxwell. very nice.
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Jan 7 2006, 01:19 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
I like it alot! Actually i would be interested in reading the rest of the script now.
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Jan 10 2006, 10:50 AM
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There are another fifty-five pages to the script, but it's not good. I don't even know where they are anymore.
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