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 Jan 4 2006, 02:32 AM
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the tears full of sadness and memories of better days ; tears from broken promises and broken homes ; tears because daddy never cared and mommy always yelled . the tears that fell from lonliness and failure ; unheard prayers and unheard wishes . the tears that marked the end of a beginning and the beginning of a never, always, lie . the tears caused from shattered dreams and shattered hearts, letdowns and breakdowns, fears, hits, and bruises .
these are the tears that are swirled, mixed, blended together, to paint the fake smile hanging crookedly upon her happy face . |
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Jan 4 2006, 04:18 PM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
that is really sad like
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Jan 6 2006, 12:53 AM
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It feels like a poem, yet it's written in prose—a paradox.
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Jan 6 2006, 02:16 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
I like it...Seems like its describing me..
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