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one way road |
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she drove down the dark road alone, with only her sorrow to keep her company . a tear dropped from her eye, making a trail of sadness down her cheek . she caught it with her tongue . the single tear tasted like bitter regrets and sweet remorse, wonderful memories and painful realization . a single tear that consisted of so much emotion .
she drove faster and faster, her sins were catching up with her . she drove faster and faster, her memories were gaining speed . she pushed down hard on the pedal, she needed to beat them to the finish line . Either God or Satan was there to greet her . she drove like the wind, escaping the pain and the heartbreak and the let downs she had experienced . she drove with reckless passion, avoiding the wrongs she had done . and then she realized, she had made a wrong turn . but she couldnt start over again . she couldnt turn back and fix her mistake . she cried out in frustration ; how had she taken the wrong road ? she was sure she had known exactly where to go, but now here she was, lost and unaware of where she was . she tried to retrack and find her way back . but she couldnt . and she heard the devil hiss into her ear ; sorry sweets, its a one way road . |
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![]() some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 ![]() |
thats jus like life but u put it in a sad way.....uu make the road that is shown to u but once its there u cant change it or go back with nothing to do but to go down it
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*mipadi* |
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An interesting viewpoint. I very much liked the use of metaphor. Is this it, or is there more to the story?
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