wondering if i should....., cant really think o fa title for it |
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 Jan 1 2006, 04:01 AM
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 some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown  Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804  |
you have always been my best friend
someone who understands the messenges i send its like when im hurt, you would heal for your problems ill help you learn to deal your someone that makes me happier to be with all i want is to tell you this that there is no greater friend out there cus the greatest is with me right here i only want you to be happy i dont care if that means to not be with me your emotions show me your more beautiful than the rest thats why to me your considered the very best being "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" means theres a chance to break-up somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck if we take the chance it means, never be the same again never back to you being my best friend i dont want to take the chance if it means i might lose you i dont want that and you should convince me if u want to |
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Jan 1 2006, 08:36 PM
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 can't touch this Group: Member Posts: 174 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 323,184 |
Took me a while to read because I'm so used to full words, (as opposed to u and so on), but I like it a lot. It's got some real meaning in it.
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Jan 2 2006, 08:44 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
QUOTE being "gf" and "bf" means theres a chance to break-up somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck if we take the chance it means, never be the same again never back to u being my best friend i dont want to take the chance if it means i might lose u i dont want that and u hav to convince me if u want to ^so true, that ending was great. I think we've all been there before, or have known someone atleast that felt that way lol. Wonderful job :) Keep writing |
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Jan 8 2006, 02:07 AM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
thx for always commenting me ^-^ ure always so very nice
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Jan 8 2006, 11:33 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 512 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 9,682 |
its a good poem. i think it would be even better if you used proper spelling, instead of ure or u .. especially the ure, because it got kinda confusing .
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Jan 9 2006, 11:17 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
k its jus that i always post writing lik that.......so ill stop when it comes to my work then.......srry it got u confused a bit.........now to edit it
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Jan 9 2006, 11:21 PM
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lol i agree with lidoxangie
but the poem was touching. lol it sounds weird but yeah.. |
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Jan 14 2006, 08:18 AM
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i can totally relate to this right now
shit dude it make me think about everything and its makin me eyes tear up i absolutely love it |
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Jan 18 2006, 07:58 PM
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 live life to the fullest <3 Group: Member Posts: 97 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 101,474 |
Aww lol i love the poem,
Being "girlfriend" and "boyfriend" means theres a chance to break-up somtimes its fate and sometimes its luck if we take the chance it means, never be the same again never back to you being my best friend So true.. |
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Jan 26 2006, 04:48 PM
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 ALLISON Group: Official Designer Posts: 3,372 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 310,259 |
i love your writing <333
cant wait for more |
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Jan 27 2006, 08:00 PM
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some reason i feel alone...guess cus my true self is never shown Group: Member Posts: 303 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 246,804 |
well im not that good and i dont really have time to write anymore cuase of school and sudden more assignments srry
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