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free flow, chapter 2
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post Dec 29 2005, 09:54 PM
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*Plays the so sick beat*

Girl everything was on its way, but everything went back to sleep
We were on the same level as always, but how did it become so deep?
I knew you had my first heart, the confession spread to my crying heart
Nobody could end our relationship, it seemed impossible to be dying apart
But you know not everything lasts forever, it can come to a dead end
I tried my hardest and my best, it's time to say bye to my best friend
Best Friend? We were more than that, I knew it was more than kissing and huggin
Before I first met you, I began hustling for freedom, like when Tupac was thuggin
I'm sorry but I have to give up my actions to sacrifice my other Life
We were the best of hope, but I guess you won't be my future wife
I was always there for your downfall, you always relied everything on me
When I asked you sweet questions, you always replied anything you...see?
Goodbye but I don't wanna see you cry, I just wanna see you smile
I wanted to be with you always, You next to me?? I could've walked more miles
Hard to turn back from you, the flowers rosing away to the sea...
Can see the tears nearly dropping, but now your set to free
Turning back from your precious, walking down to the door with much sun light...
I see a newcoming, but this wasnt the end of the beginning
I could picture you in my heart, so gracefully singing

Door's about to close...You know how we did right.....The memories when we always used to happily fight....Everything was real love, how can I stop missing you...........
 
mzislandpinay
post Dec 29 2005, 09:57 PM
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Call me Elsie Mae
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o0oo thats deep.

haha i like it
 
Tribal J_Rome
post Dec 29 2005, 10:11 PM
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wut wut in the butt?
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niiice, i liked it too.
 
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post Dec 30 2005, 04:00 PM
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Uppin for some more feedback.
 

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