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 Dec 24 2005, 08:19 PM
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I wrote another one. Its called 'My Addiction':
Infatuate my soul
With your promises Circulate your lies Through my veins Invade my mind Destroy my motives in waves of vanity Mislead me And dispose of me You are my false hope My addiction -Ariel |
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Dec 25 2005, 01:46 AM
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arieelll...
 well written. so simple, but i loved it, keep it up! 
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Dec 26 2005, 11:00 PM
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its really nice written.
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Dec 27 2005, 01:56 AM
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I gave you everything ... Group: Member Posts: 81 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 334,433 |
cool
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Dec 27 2005, 03:21 AM
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ohh thats really good.
such a good mixture of settleness and emotion. |
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Dec 27 2005, 01:33 PM
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 I'll be your Rock N Roll Queen Group: Member Posts: 68 Joined: Dec 2005 Member No: 324,951 |
beatuiful well written
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Dec 30 2005, 01:46 AM
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 DAM ITS SHELBY Group: Member Posts: 105 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,864 |
damn. on the real =D
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Jan 2 2006, 08:51 AM
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Oh wow, short but very powerful.
Perfect choice of words. I didn't know you could write like this. Call me crazy but i think this is the first piece of writing i've seen from you. Everyone else has mentioned you were a good writer,so when i saw your name in the writing section, i decided to check your writing out. And i can see what people are talking about. You are very good :) |
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Jan 2 2006, 11:20 AM
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 I love Havasupai Group: Member Posts: 1,040 Joined: Jul 2005 Member No: 163,878 |
Oooohhh....that's seductive. It has a pov of someone who has honestly examined the roots of addiction while in a Methodone clinic. Brilliant!
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