Goodbye Options

[Dark's Angel]

Goodbye

The sky darkens.
Your presence fades.
I always end up alone.
Can't some one like me for me?
Cant some one stay with me?
Am I repulsive?
Am I unworthy of frienship?
Everyone that tries to get close to me,
usually has an alterior motive.
Why can't someone be my friend?
Why can't someone not use me for their own gain?
I'm through with being someone else's toy.
You're never gonna see me again.
You're never going to get the chance,
to use me for you own personal gain.
This is goodbye to all the pain and sadness.
This is goodbye to you.
Sayonara.

[hi-C]

Stylistically, I'd take out the "Sayonara" at the end. Also the coma at the end of the line, "Everyone that tries to get close to me."

I like how the beginning sounds kinda sad and pitiful and the end sounds kind of firey and angry. It's nice.

[Dark's Angel]

I know what you're talking about. I thought about doing that at first but then when I looked at it, I added the comma and sayonara to the end. I had a slightly different version of this but i thought that this was the better version of it. I'm glad that you like it though.