Sincerely, Me |
  |
 Nov 30 2005, 02:47 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
Sincerely, Me.
If you go introspective, where does your outside go? can you still be there if no one sees you? just part of the scenery shadow, faded real, yet intangible, yet infalibale out of sight, out of mind? i suppose not. because, after all, hes out of sight but i just wrote 'he'. Out of mind, out of sight? better, 'cus duh. but, who do we see, right in front of us? the guy who's there? or the introinspection of himself thrust out inwards? or you? where are you? who are you? are you? You- |
|
|
|
|
Nov 30 2005, 02:52 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Ah I love the way you write your poems James.
Very Unique. Sincerely, Me....wait..isn't that a song? Eh, probably not, but it sounds familiar. "but, who do we see, right infront of us? the guy who's there? or the introinspection of himself thrust out inwards?" -wonderful |
|
|
|
|
Nov 30 2005, 03:00 PM
Post
#3
|
|
|
Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
dear jamie, sincerely me, is a song by hellogoodbye... which i realized after i wrote this... i knew it sounded familiar.
thanks, katie = ) oh.. poo. i spelt the topic title incorrectly. *edits* |
|
|
|
| *stephinika* |
Nov 30 2005, 10:57 PM
Post
#4
|
|
Guest |
lovely work james. i quite like this one. i just love your style of writing.
|
|
|
|
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: