Appreciate Life, Don't forget to write |
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 Nov 29 2005, 12:55 AM
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Senior Member  Group: Duplicate Posts: 459 Joined: Nov 2005 Member No: 308,469  |
The military teaches you one thing.
All of life is to be appreciated until you die. When you do, don't forget to write. I don't expect a suicide letter. |
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Dec 10 2005, 12:51 AM
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 dripping destruction Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 7,282 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 21,929 |
errr...
i think a concept is there (although i'm not too sure what it is...) mayhaps, make it longer? or clarify the last two lines... they seem to contradict. |
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