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Nianna, My second Elven girl
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post Nov 23 2005, 06:44 PM
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http://www.deviantart.com/view/25583177/

Spent around 4 hours on her, I think she's rather pretty.

Edit: Okay people, since this piece is so 'weird' to you all, please tell me HOW it is weird. I cannot fix anything if you continue giving me awful critcism.
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 07:06 PM
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She is pretty. The only thing that really bugs me is the outline of her. It doesn't look natural... know what I mean? Good job though, very nice.
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 08:29 PM
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its nice but she has two small a forhead and a weird nose
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 08:44 PM
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i think its juss cuz you need to feather it a tiny bit more
its inceredibly good otherwise
 
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post Nov 23 2005, 11:14 PM
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No, her forehead is just fine, I wanted it that way, thank you.
And how exactly is her nose 'weird'.
Atleast try and give some good criticism.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:10 AM
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I like it, although the hair is kind of weird to me, but I guess I like it that way.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:21 AM
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Once again, HOW is it weird?
What is weird about it, so I can fix something.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:25 AM
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Well, I just like the green on top of her head to be less saturated...
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:27 AM
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Really really really really good. The outline of the girl just at the top near the hair is a bit choppy...thats all though. Otherwise, a fantastic job.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:47 AM
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Okay, I fixed the choppiness of the hair, but I won't fix the saturation. I like it how it is.
Thank you for the suggestions.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:56 AM
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It's awful.

But only because you haven't talked to me in so long. ;|
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 12:58 AM
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QUOTE(waccoon @ Nov 23 2005, 11:56 PM)
It's awful.

But only because you haven't talked to me in so long. ;|
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PFT, don't even pull that crap. I tried to talk to you so many times.
You never answered.
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post Nov 24 2005, 01:12 AM
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Get aim. >;/
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 01:33 AM
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I really really like that. I love the design on her back and around her eye. The only thing that bothers me is the left side of her dress doesn't blend in that well with the rest of the picture, if that makes sense...Other than that, though, it looks wonderful to me _smile.gif
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 10:32 AM
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It's gorgeous
The hair, her face, her back...it all looks so awesome
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post Nov 24 2005, 02:10 PM
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the nose looks a little choppy on top
but other than that its gorgeous
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 09:42 PM
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I LOVE ALL UR WORK. this is gorgeus dont change a thing. WOW its one of my favorites happy.gif
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 09:59 PM
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Thank you.
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 10:23 PM
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I don't think it's weird at all!! I LOVE IT!! I love everything about it. I think I may PM you to ask you how you are so creative rolleyes.gif and how you do all the little dots and things...if you do not mind of course!
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 10:33 PM
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The dots are brushes from http://spiritsighs.deviantart.com
 
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post Nov 24 2005, 11:54 PM
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Its not weird. I love it. =)
The only thing that could be a little better it the hair. Looks...videogameish? i guess thats it...
but other than that,tis perfect.
 
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That is soo pretty! Awesome Job!!
 
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post Nov 25 2005, 09:09 AM
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i think thats awesome. i love the eye color
 
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post Nov 25 2005, 10:23 AM
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This is incredible- very elegant, nice use of color.
 
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post Nov 25 2005, 11:23 AM
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Its amazing! Absolutly beautiful! Nice job!! I love it. Everything blends together so smoothly. =) Awesome job.
 
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post Nov 25 2005, 12:05 PM
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I love it. I don't think it's wierd.
 
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post Nov 26 2005, 02:11 AM
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it looks really great. the only thing that bothers me is the back..it looks unnatural because i THINK it would usually show shadows of the bons. it's really smooth on the piece you made. but otherwise it look great. the hair is stunning
 
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post Nov 26 2005, 02:35 AM
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ah! i always look forward to your artwork!
I love how you did the eyes too, the butterfly wings. Intriguing.
The colors. Breathtaking.

Wonderful job! :)
 
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post Nov 26 2005, 03:07 AM
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wow..i love it! i like ur use of green to make the hair stand out from the bg =]
 
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post Dec 6 2005, 07:16 PM
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She's gorgeous. Excellent job.

xo, Pauline
 
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post Dec 6 2005, 07:34 PM
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that is amazing, amazing, and amazing!
everything is perfect, except the top of her head. it's weird because it is a bit to sharp and "cut-ooff" looking. maybe if you feathered it it would look better...?
 
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