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Deteriorate
Dark's Angel
post Oct 24 2005, 04:40 PM
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Deteriorate

Dark clouds loom
over the horizon
my future looks bleak
can you save me from it?
I'm not sure that you can
even if you try your hardest
I'm falling apart
If you try to save me
you'll have to save me from myself
I'm slowly destoying myself
and you can't do anything to stop it


Whoa... I don't know why I always end up doing dark poems...I've done happy poems but they always have some kind of dark theme in them.
 
RiddleMeWonders
post Nov 12 2005, 02:40 AM
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It feels like it should go with some sort of photograph.
 
Dark's Angel
post Dec 1 2005, 05:34 PM
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Yeah I know what you mean...The picture would look pretty cool.
 

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