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tired abigal, clawing for solid ground
RiddleMeWonders
post Oct 2 2005, 09:58 PM
Post #1


fell in love with a boy
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Those eyes such a shade of green
that my own have never seen
I stared at their owner for near an hour
My own a chocolate brown
So dull but ever seeing beauty in the hearts of many
and A
Mind
Full
Of unrecorded Sound
I want never to have it bottled for a price
Like water which is ever giving life
My words if ever would suffice


I'm not inclined to try something new
by just
D
i
v
i
n
g into it without a second thought
Therefore,
Forgive me if I do not answer as quickly as an online search engine
I'm just a young lady simple as can be
I can't see the future
or cast mAgiK sPeLlS
or summon your demons back to hEll
Freeing
you from whatever ring of that your parents managed to put you through
Hoping it'd be a heaven of interest instead of a
Unheard
lesson
in
life.
For I am that rambler with nothing immediate to say
and my rewards are not that
GREAT.
I still have much to learn, so until then,
Please go away.
 
KissMe2408
post Oct 3 2005, 12:32 PM
Post #2


Yawn
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QUOTE
I'm not inclined to try something new
by just
D
i
v
i
n
g into it without a second thought

^loved that part!
Your poetry is so unique, and so REAL.
You are so gifted. I don't know why people don't comment on your stuff?
Wonderful work :)
 

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