Standing Alone, I don't need you |
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 Oct 2 2005, 10:47 AM
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 My name's Katt. Nice to meet you!  Group: Member Posts: 3,826 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,674  |
Standing Alone
The last of your curse, Is fading away, The vision of your face, Has no place in my mind, The pain you once caused me, Has its territory in my life, But it's fading away, As fast as you left me. How could I believe you, When everything was a lie? How could I hold you, If none of it was real? How could I look at you, And think you were beautiful? Why did you lie to me? You mean nothing to me now, But I can only wonder, What the hell is wrong with you? Can you see me now? Do you want me back? Can you see what I've become, WITHOUT YOU? I DON'T NEED YOU. |
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Oct 3 2005, 12:35 PM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Whoa, very emotional. I like it very much though,
especially this line: "How could I look at you, And think you were beautiful?" ^i dunno why, that line got to me though. Great job :O) |
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Oct 4 2005, 04:22 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
Hehe nicely done =P This poem should be used on people who who broke up and the girl doesn't want the guy back =P.
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