Without a Sound |
  |
 Sep 20 2005, 08:53 PM
Post
#1
|
|
 Bardic Nation  Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059  |
Without a Sound
lustful quakes reverberate throughout- introspected subtle motion, detected in sound- in taste shall it never abound without- within it's dug deeper beneath the cryptic- drug out into the light to burn with it- which was the way to begin again? was it that mail left on the table to send- and where must i go there then and when- forever lost to the miniscule devices- my heart lost growth three sizes- forgetting to love again's rises- and then forgetting to reprieve despises- the moon howls out for new license- my heavy burden dropped over the side's and- i wanted to drown in attempt to save it- a false boldness and then i crave it- still i'm left in my lengthy waving- |
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2005, 06:40 PM
Post
#2
|
|
 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
I love it.
Brilliant. |
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2005, 07:06 PM
Post
#3
|
|
 Lil JC Group: Member Posts: 868 Joined: May 2005 Member No: 145,741 |
too many big words didnt get past the first sentence
|
|
|
|
|
Sep 21 2005, 08:55 PM
Post
#4
|
|
|
fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(lbjshaq2345 @ Sep 21 2005, 7:06 PM) too many big words didnt get past the first sentence  you've got to be kidding me. get a friggin dictionary. |
|
|
|
|
1 User(s) are reading this topic (1 Guests and 0 Anonymous Users)
0 Members: