Red Tainted Darkness, A poem I wrote... Post more poems later |
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 Sep 16 2005, 02:22 PM
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 The Rose In The Darknes  Group: Member Posts: 66 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 234,254  |
Red Tainted Darkness
By: Akiko (RoseOfBlackFlame) Broken Hearted Shattered Soul Tattered Being Dagger Plunged Right To The Very Core Of My Life Crimson Red Slowly Flowing Pushing Out Against Ice-Cold Earth Staining The Pure Colors Of The Frozen Ground It Starts To Slow Darkness sets Body’s Cold Fear Seizes The Soul As Terror Fills The Mind Finally… Soul Starts To Ease Body Slowly Relaxes As It Gives Into The Very Darkness That Stole It Into Fearing Crimson Red Stops Flowing As The Cool Ground Stays Stained With The Blood Red Color Broken Hearted Shattered Soul Tattered Being Dagger Plunged Right To The Very Core Of My Life. |
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Sep 18 2005, 12:44 PM
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 straight as a rainbow and twice as colorful Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,415 |
this is really good
dark and morbid... my favorite I love the imagery don't know what else to say... loved it |
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Sep 20 2005, 07:47 PM
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The Rose In The Darknes Group: Member Posts: 66 Joined: Sep 2005 Member No: 234,254 |
Thanks. ^^' I was in a depressed mood... that's when I tend to write these.. >_o
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Oct 5 2005, 04:29 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
^ Lovely poem. Your very descriptive on how it would look like if someone died. its an amazing piece =P
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