Basick and Wayne Present - All Eyes on Kangsta, World Premiere of Kangsta Lovin Inside ! Options

[JazzePhae]

What the f*ck is a Kangsta

Since your just a kid and my style is not to hurt peoples feelings im just going to say you need work.

I saw the lyrics for this thread and Honestly the lyrics in the first verse wasn't really all that bad. I enjoyed that harry potter line it was very creative and I doubt people who aren't fans of hip hop really wouldt understand the complexity of that line. The second verse was okay but your Bar structure was off. Im surprised the song lasted as long as it did with the way it was constructed. I admire you kid for actually trying but like everyone has said your a little too young to write lyrics such as those. You should go with a lil bow wow approach on your songs. He doesn't use vulgar and vile language in order to bring his point across. Also you probably just learned from this song that rap is a lot harder to catch the rhythm than what most people assume when writing your lyrics. Learn how to catch and feel the rhythm of the beat. Keep working hard eventually you will learn the timing and get the hang of it.

Good Luck kid I would really find it funny if you are on the mixtape scene in the next few years. Hey anything is possible.


I also think people should stop downright dissing you until they put one of their songs on hear for everyone to hear, otherwise they should just use constructive criticism to get their point across.

[azn_r4pf4n]

What the f*ck is a Kangsta

Since your just a kind and my style is not to hurt peoples feelings im just going to say you need work.

I saw the lyrics for this thread and Honestly the lyrics in the first verse wasn't really all that bad. I enjoyed that harry potter line it was very creative and I doubt people who aren't fans of hip hop really wouldn't understand the complexity of that line.  The second verse was okay but your Bar structure was off. Im surprised the song lasted as long as it did with the way it was constructed. I admire you kid for actually trying but like everyone has said your a little too young to write lyrics such as those. You should go with a lil bow wow approach on your songs. He doesn't use vulgar and vile language in order to bring his point across. Also you probably just learned from this song that rap is a lot harder to catch the rhythm than what most people assume when writing your lyrics. Learn how to catch and feel the rhythm of the beat. Keep working hard eventually you will learn the timnig and get the hang of it.

Good Luck kid I would really find it funny if you are on the mixtape scene in the next few years. Hey anything is possible.
I also think people should stop downright dissing you until they put one of their songs on hear for everyone to hear, otherwise they should just use constructive criticism to get their point across.

[Angel_Cece]

http://home.comcast.net/~angeezy/Kangsta-K...in-2005-bsk.mp3


is that some kind of joke? LMAO that sh!t was disgraceful

[*basick*]

lol welcome back angel_cece i havent seen you in a while

[ItzOnlySydney]

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i actually listened to it . the music is okay and your voice is not what i expected . yea i couldn't hear most of what you said either. but it wasn't THAT bad.

This post has been edited by ItzOnlySydney: Jul 28 2005, 02:13 AM

[LEGITERICJONES]

Nice interview.. You need to buy a better MIC. You have decent lyrics. Keep at it

[*Statistik*]

Nice interview.. You need to buy a better MIC. You have decent lyrics. Keep at it 

Appreciate it homie.

[FilipinoFaShow]

srry man, u is a big pile of sh*t lit on fire, ur sh*t stinks. get a new mic too, blurry as f*ck. Plus ur flow has now flow, u gotta get wit tha beat, ur bars is too sloppy, ur rhymes is too mediocre man. AND what in the world is a kangsta?

[pinklove_stains]

i prefer the background music.

good luck though.

[internetwar]

lay off the grass dude, it helps.

Seriously though, for a start, your recording studio which i'm assuming is your room has lots of static noise, you might want to close all the windows and door and put lots of comforter/blanket around you room to suppress excess sound.

Secondly, get a quality mic. something like Shure KSM27 Studio Microphone, it might drain your pocket but if you're passionate about rapping/recording then, it shouldn't be a problem.

And ofcourse, please record it INTERNALLY, not the way you did it where the background music comes out of the speaker. you're losing A LOT of quality in music. There are many programs that will let you do multiple track recording. It's not hard to learn. like Audacity which can be mastered in a day or two

Don't give up, we all start small but do progress or people will still laugh at you.

[kantoaznboi]

its interesting. the beat is chill, but theres a lack of emotion as u rap. it sounds like ur jsut talking to music. and the flow of ur rap seemed a lil off of the beat in the music. imo

when u do any type of performance, u have 2 tap into that passion, the emotion that gives a song the umph so that the audience can get a sense that u actually mean wat ur performing.

[*Statistik*]

lay off the grass dude, it helps.

Seriously though, for a start, your recording studio which i'm assuming is your room has lots of static noise, you might want to close all the windows and door and put lots of comforter/blanket around you room to suppress excess sound.

Secondly, get a quality mic. something like Shure KSM27 Studio Microphone, it might drain your pocket but if you're passionate about rapping/recording then, it shouldn't be a problem. 

And ofcourse, please record it INTERNALLY, not the way you did it where the background music comes out of the speaker. you're losing A LOT of quality in music. There are many programs that will let you do multiple track recording. It's not hard to learn. like Audacity which can be mastered in a day or two

Don't give up, we all start small but do progress or people will still laugh at you.

I got a crappy logitech headset

[*RiC3xBoy*]

As everyone says, get a new mic...

Pros
+ like the beat
+ good amout of bass

Cons
- cant even hear you have the time
- your flow seems real choppy
- sync your lyrics with the music more

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason come back to the game, the world wasn't ready for you yet. Finish up that Kangsta album, you got the streets talking man.

[IIIIIIIIIIIIIIII...]

^ LOLLL

choppy ass mic :(

[*liquidize*]

I put that shit on my ipod hell yeah

[*Statistik*]

^I don't even care about that shit anymore. I made that like 8 months ago. Now I'm different. So shut the f**k up.

[*liquidize*]

wtf you talking about jason?
you talkin to me?

[*Statistik*]

lmao don't worry guys. for the last like 9-10 ive wayy improved .. ive became a better lyricist, a much improved 16-bar lyricist, working on my home studio step by step (nothing major) though .. lmao I remember this .. when I first made my song that was pile of sh*t .. now it's nothing like that .. I remember all these f**king haters .. lol sorry if I bumped this .. if you gonna hate more, heat dickheadz

[MrElsewhere]

DAMN.

Resurrected from the dead.

you should drop another track.

[*Statistik*]

^Again, that first garbage track wasn't even official .. it was just a rough draft .. reason why I was pissed off was because these bunch of d**k suckers came in here talkin too much bullshit you know .. don't worry, in the summer, ill work on hard dropping a "REAL" track.