can someone rate my freestyle too? Options

[NiKECHiQ]

^ LMAO so far taki is whoopin jason`s ass.

[*CrackedRearView*]

Okay kids, now that you've flipped ya lids../
It's time to getcha dumbasses taken off of the rap grids../
Both of ya'z dumb as hell../
Both of ya can't spell../
Both of ya got pubes? Cause damn man, it's hard to tell../
This ain't real life 'homie', it's an online site../
So what's the f**kin' point in this dumbass lyrical fight?/
Listen, take it from me, I know my shit../
You can't rap, you can't rhyme, you ain't cool, so just quit../
Why talk about bein' gangsta when you'z just a clown?/
I'm a poet, I can rhyme, I can take yo ass to town../
But I'd rather make my point pretty clear, pretty crystal../
Just need to know, mini-gangstaz, have you ever held a pistol?/
Have you even seen a P**sy? Have you even kissed a girl?/
Or confused your hormones so much that they'z spinnin' whirl n' twirl?/
I think I figured out the truth, I think I know the reason why../
I think I've found out just the reason that you online p**sies try../
I admit I'm not a rapper, I admit I'm not a 'G'../
I just wanna let you know, I just wanna set you free../
This goes out to both my 'dawgs', this is strictly for the clown../
Shut your stupid f**kin' mouths and sit your punk asses down./

I wanna see how the mini-pimps respond, seriously. Anyone can make rhyming couplets...you just have to f**k up all of the grammar to make it a 'rap'.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Im going to ask you politely to back off./
Becuz your not even old enough for michael to j*ck off/
Yes you have guessed it/
On the mic you have just been molested/
Your no challenge i havn't been tested/
Your flow is tired but mine is fully rested/
I want tell nobody why you sing high pitch/
All you need to know is im rick james b*tch/
I feel sorry for you since you have been misrepresented and used/
Game over, goodbye, try again you lose/

[*nightmare4taki*]

YOur below flawless and not even perfect/
Crack ill your career on wax so was it really worth it/
You f*ckin with a real wordsmith/
Dont be jeolous because you didn't get the gift/
Man i will murk you hurt you and put you in a coma/
Dont f*ck with me iff you want to graduate with your diploma/

[*CrackedRearView*]

Aight, I'ma just pretend like you didn't even speak../
Because honestly, 'e-thug' yo shit ain't even weak../
It's much worse, it's like those nails runnin down the chalk board../
All the shit you just said was disregarded, and ignored../
'Mini-pimp', you'z so funny man, you love to make me laugh../
But man my last rap shows you're taken off the rap graph../
You are no one, you'z a joke, you'z a second-rate fool../
You'z just verbally abused n' used so much I'll call you 'tool'../
So 'tool', what's your job, to try your best to get heard?/
I must be honest, no one cares about the word from e-nerd../
And e-nerd's word is getting trashed right here and now at my expense../
Shit, half the time your half-assed rhyme didn't make no f**kin' sense../
Yep, that's you, you mini-pimp, you're a f**kin' piece of work../
But I'm still laughin', I won't stop, I won't break my little smirk../
Here's my point just one more time, and you need to pay attention../
E-thug, e-nerd, 'tool', and mini-pimp just ain't worth mention../
So one more time man, give it up, run along and get to bed../
My last suggestion is just quit...just quit while you're ahead../

[dani41790]

heh woah. started out as jason vs. nightmare4taki now its CrackedRearView vs. nightmare4taki. hmmm

[toodlepops.]

Uhh, okay.
I would like to see both of you rap for real, that should be fun!

[azn_r4pf4n]

okay, this is becoming a nightmare. soon we're gonna have a whole bunch of ppl rapping.

[william]

this has to be one of the most entertaining threads i've read in awhile.

[clarissa]

LOL so funny.

[WTFwasIthinking]

Because impossible is nothing man. You dont know what'll happen unless u believe in ur self in rappin..rappin is my thing..for life yo i try hard

OHHH MY GOD.... stop watchin' 8 Mile and listenin' to 50's album 'n thinkin' you hip hop... you're beyond wack... jus' give it a rest

[cool_twin]

It's okay i guess......... not terrible.........

[*nightmare4taki*]

How much more can i take i really can't stand this/
IM about to make you disappear and vanish/
How many times do have to go on killing you/
Name me one instance where someone was feeling you/
Please just back away and get out of my face/
No one can save you not even pastor mase/
You and Jason provide a little comic releif/
But your just a citizen and im the cheif/
You got the game on smash, Okay just stooooooooooooooooooop/
Your the first forum rapper ive actually seen floooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop/
We all know you aint nothin but a b*tch ass hater/
I hitcha up and you start breathin harder than darth vader/
I dont understand what the f*ck you trying to do/
But baby shoes have more soul than you/
Im the one who makes the whole crowd jump/
If i hit you in the stomach you will probaly take a dump/
We all know you aint nothin but a scrub/
YOur name is crackedrearview because your a homo thug/

Make you swallow a hollow come along and follow
f*ck that gggggggggggggg-unit nope gggggggggggggggggoodbye

[*nightmare4taki*]

CRACKED REARVIEW YOU R A FRAUD ANY WAY CHECK THIS PEOPLE

IN his first rap he states

I admit I'm not a rapper, I admit I'm not a 'G'../

Second raps

'Mini-pimp', you'z so funny man, you love to make me laugh../
But man my last rap shows you're taken off the rap graph../

HE not a rapper but does rap shows

[*CrackedRearView*]

That's right bitch, I'm a hater fo' rill../
I hate stupid little kiddies with a big lack of skill../
I guarantee two points that prove that you'z a stupid nigga../
1)you dream of bein' famous 2)but you'll never make six-figgas../
Fact remains, this is the net, this is not a rap battle../
You'z a kid, you just gotta drop your bottle and your rattle../
All you bring at me is 'I'm da best, I got all da flow'../
And it's obvious you just don't listen, you'z just a little slow../
So I'ma slow it down a little bit just so you can hear../
Y-o-u a-r-e n-o-t c-o-o-l, is that clear, queer?
But I gotta life, gotta go handle reality now 'dawg', /
So have a nice day of dreamin' roamin' 'round createBlog./

[*CrackedRearView*]

Haha, what now? You gettin' scared, gotta do it outta rhyme?/
Why you quotin' from my raps? Did you shitcho' pants this time?/
This guy's a 'thug', remember? A 'rapper-soon-to-be'../
But look at his last one, he must be scared of CRV../

[*nightmare4taki*]

I'll finish u in 4 bars

Of course this creat blog sh*t is fun/
Your not neo so your not the one/
WHy you tring to brag and boast/
Called it a wrap your already done yet another m.c. who got burnt like toast/

[*basick*]

OHHH MY GOD....  stop watchin' 8 Mile and listenin' to 50's album 'n thinkin' you hip hop... you're beyond wack... jus' give it a rest

LMFAOOOOO............ BOTH OF YOU ARE WACK... YOU ARE WHAT KANYE WAS TALKING ABOUT IN "WACK NIGGAS"....

Wake up in the morning dawg, and you a Wack nigga
I'd kill myself if I was that Wack nigga
Everything you wear and rock, is just Wack nigga
Even if you flossin' rocks you still Wack nigga
You can't do it dawg you's a Wack nigga
Bitin' ass, bitch ass, trick ass Wack nigga
Even your daughter says "My daddy's a Wack nigga

[william]

So I'ma slow it down a little bit just so you can hear../
Y-o-u a-r-e n-o-t c-o-o-l, is that clear, queer?

rofl. i think that was the best two lines in this whole thread so far.

[Trolling]

I think I just sharted myself... OMG... Id kill myself jason or never show my face or sn around here again.... Take down that kangsta shit at least god damn -.-

[*nightmare4taki*]

Yo CRV I heard you and another dude kissed/
THis is a suicide and im only here to assist/
Im getting tired of wasting my time/
Your nothing but a video game thug so go and play true crime/
My flow has so many dimensions/
THats why my vocab is beyond your comprehension/
Enough, I see you have a lot of tension and stress/
I need a formidable foe because this is no contest/
Take your wack rhymes back to hill crest/
Your a b*tch, go put back on your dress/
And stop saying N*gga if your not a brother/
Your lyrics r wack no wonder you and jason were meant for each other/
My flow is precise and accurate/
ANd you dont want to see how a black n*gga get/
Your finished no more going back and forth cheers/
You couldnt top this in the next 100 years/
Step to me again and you will perish forever/
YOu coming back from this, never/

[*Statistik*]

hey taki wat did u mean by "jason i will show u friday the 13th?"

[*nightmare4taki*]

i was just kidding because your name was jason lol

[*Statistik*]

Yo taki and crack this is for both of u bitches
jersey holla..yo
I'm a hip hop artist, you style biting emcee sucker
Had a crayon contest with retarted kids and picked the wackest album cover
Picked the wrong emcee to diss subliminally, every line dissected
Yeah, I diss you on the internet, to your face and on record
For the record, I know the muck from which out you have stepped
First you sound like Beatnuts, then you're mr. 4,000 syllables
One bar, out of breath on stage a failure
Gotta quit rockin' mics and start rockin' an asthma inhaler
El-Producto, independent as Fox
Since when do indie records show up in a W-E-A box?
By saying your independent, you belittle the whole movement
Real emcee's work hard, ain't got investors to put out their music
Underground conspiracy, but this ain't used by No Limit
Mad 'cause you didn't blow up, the victim of your own wack gimmick
But some fools bought into it 'cause they don't know no better
That you're a hamburger pimp, only out for the cheddar

[*CrackedRearView*]

Yo CRV I heard you and another dude kissed/
THis is a suicide and im only here to assist/
Im getting tired of wasting my time/
Your nothing but a video game thug so go and play true crime/
My flow has so many dimensions/
THats why my vocab is beyond your comprehension/
Enough, I see you have a lot of tension and stress/
I need a formidable foe because this is no contest/
Take your wack rhymes back to hill crest/
Your a b*tch, go put back on your dress/
And stop saying N*gga if your not a brother/
Your lyrics r wack no wonder you and jason were meant for each other/
My flow is precise and accurate/
ANd you dont want to see how a black n*gga get/
Your finished no more going back and forth cheers/
You couldnt top this in the next 100 years/
Step to me again and you will perish forever/
YOu coming back from this, never/

First off, 'LMAO', your vocab's better?/
Take notes kid, I'm write you out a little letter../

Dear Tool, you don't know me, but I really wanna meet you../
Just need to say that verbally, CRV will always beat you../
He's a poet, it's his job, his words extend for miles past yours../
Which explains why he's in college and you're moppin' restroom floors../
Signed,
Reality
And one more thing, this shit ain't real, it's a game that no one plays../
It's the internet, from now on 'e-' should be on every phrase../
So like you say, when I e-step to you then I'll e-perish../
But I ain't e-scared, e-steppin' to you's somethin' that I e-cherish../
I cherish all this shit, it's all on your behalf../
Thanks once again, mini-pimp, ....I always need a laugh../