can someone rate my freestyle too? Options

[NiKECHiQ]

I sit here pop locking in my b-boy stance/
Why am I freestyling against a kid that still wets his pance/

LMAO this thread is interesting

[jordanriane]

I just lost 2 minutes of my life reading this thread.

[*nightmare4taki*]

CRV No one can compete when they meet defeat/
Your rhymes are really weak and beneath Obsolete /
Your dead meat take a seat you no longer reside/
Your nothing but a coward go run and hide/
Quit talking all that hot sh*t
What you know about that Pac sh*t/
I chop you up like a butcher/
Kill you, smoke a blunt, and forget where I put cha/
I told this man he didn’t want to push me/
You WNBA, all p*ssy/
Let me make him understand the man who delt him the wrong hand/
My lyrics are so hot they should be on demand/
Come on CRV you make me laugh because your nothing but a joke/
Your rhymes are more horrible than O.G. LOC/ <----------------------------(G.T.A. San Andreas)
Of course This is not a 8mile freestyle because your Shakespeare sh*t is softcore/
I got rap galore to make n*ggas hit the floor/
Come on this is like 50 vs Jay Z/
Everything you say does not phase me/
The only way you beat me is if you luck up/
Can someone please tell this man to please shut the f*Ck up/
I’ll peel off your skin just like a apple/
And pop your top open like a bottle of snapple/
On the microphone I was born to bust/
I make you eat dirt and then fart dust/
I dangerous born to bust those who oppose/
I can’t help it im the one God chose/
Here the ooooohs and the awwwwwwwwwws/
I have more tricks up my sleeves than the wizard of oz/
Come on again your toast/
Your rap has fell off just like the west coast/
As a matter of fact there is no getting past this/
You just got turned into a pile of ashes/

[*Statistik*]

Yo taki
your hip-hop is dead/
why are you even postin careless shit in this thread/
your rhymes are so senseless i still havent read/
What Mic Checka told is a lie that nigga gay
I'll show you what I do I spit all ova you like a K
I'll merk yo yo punk ass on any givin day
You "nightmare taki" I kill on a on a hitman job
Stepin up to me hope you ready to be robed
Eat this nigga up like corn on the cobb
I spit freshness out like when I use colgate
Don't step up to me again bitch ass No-weight
Yo bitch and you can watch my magnum bust
Yo shit go wood mine go platinum plus
Kill dis dude wit out warnin shots
I pop heat I be warmin Glocks
Aim for yo neck kill you on da spot

[azn_r4pf4n]

As Ai Moriroku says, "Non-stop."

This thread will never stop. it's createblog's entertainment for free.

[*CrackedRearView*]

I'm still amazed by this kid and that he thinks he's so cool../
When we've already established him a no-nothing tool../
E-thug continues bringin' me all these e-chuckles../
I bet he jumps on stage and sweats it out, knees buckle../
Poor kid with a keyboard and without a mic../
This is just like the justice system, you hit your third strike../
Now hold out your wrists and I'll give you your cuffs../
It's time to lock you up man, you've had enough../
Now get in the backseat, and we'll drive real slow../
You need to think real hard, you need to learn, and know../
That you're a kid on the 'net, you're not a thug on stage../
You're on a forum topic, this is just the 6th page../
You need a dose of reality for your dazed little ass../
You need to hop off the PC and get back to class../
You're playin' Russian roulette, man../
Go ahead, place your bet, man../
I'm tryna' help you now man, I feel bad for you../
You've shown me that you're nothin', I kinda feel sad for you../
My future is set, but you're gonna lose../
Cause we know mini-pimps aren't what colleges choose../
So make the right choice and get back on the rails../
This thug life ain't for you..you'll learn that in jail../

[azn_r4pf4n]

even though lots of these rhymes around here r bad, they make good criticism.

E-thug continues bringin' me all these e-chuckles../

true.

Cause we know mini-pimps aren't what colleges choose../

hahahaha

Poor kid with a keyboard and without a mic../

ya, this would b better with mics.

I'm still amazed by this kid and that he thinks he's so cool../
When we've already established him a no-nothing tool../

"Lemme hear you say R-E-S-P-E-C-T!!" - Crystal Kay


*laughs* ill just keep watching this

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason you amaze me and disgrace me all in one motion/
YOu and CRV need to go drown yourselfs in a ocean/
We have a man whose scared to admitted but hes feeling my rhymes/
Posting them and taking them for his self everytime/
Well it doesnt matter im all cool with it/
Just as long as you knew who really spit it/
Ok you two can do the math/
The truth is CRV and Jason r psychopaths/
Everytime they flow they really make me laugh/
They crack me up everytime the time past/
Mad cuz im still whooping they ass/
I sent your whole worlds crashing down fast/

[azn_r4pf4n]

YOu and CRV need to go drown yourselfs in a ocean/

u and CRV need to unite

[*nightmare4taki*]

There is no way you can defy this/
Come you better than me if thats the case this sight is racially bias/
We can go battle at a real hip hop site and watch you get rejected/
I don’t need my props to know that im highly respected/
Maybe they would understand if they herd it spoke and not written/
Because my punchlines were burning like a oven mitten/
Needless to say all you do is copy my lines/
You plagiarize, now thats a true crime/
All you do if post right behind me as if I really care/
Just shows I have the balls and you cant compare/
Your boneless you have no spine/
Mad because im the one with the shine/
Jealous one be envy while im victorious/
Massacre your ass like them madingo warriors/
This is written you have to speak it for it to sound better/
Game beat joe on paper but spoken joe mad him get wetter/ <----(another ghetto term -don’t ask)
Maybe thats why im actually winning but receiving backlash/
Or maybe its because Im a black man with cash/
Something some of these people wouldn’t understand/
CRV you wouldn’t last a day as a blackman/
They hate to admit it when I spit it my flow is to sick/
SO CRV please stay of the T.I.P. of my diiiiiiiiiick!/

[azn_r4pf4n]

You plagiarize, now thats a true crime/

many rappers start out like that when they run out of things to rhyme.

[*CrackedRearView*]

This'll be my last rap..I've had enough../
You just don't listen bitch, you're just too tough../
I already said it, you're typin' on the 'net../
I guess that's too tough a concept to get../
I've wasted an hour of my life here tonight../
And you still can't seem to understand this shit right../
So I'm out, I've taught you all the lessons you need../
Just do what my 'raps' say, follow their lead../
If you decide to go and be a mini-pimp thug again../
Then I'm sorry..try not to take it in the ass in the pen../

EDIT: The end.

[*nightmare4taki*]

I see you like my internet thug line/
When you going to be original and stop stealing mine/
Look what we really have here/
How he gone rap when he was just doing shakesphere/
WHere art thou juliet/
Under the sheets with me getting wet/
I set her free no need to thank me/
She was kinda freaky and said "spank me"/
I was like hold up babygurl slow down your role/
But she told me she was looking for a d*ck to hold/
Come on my flow is what made me/
Dont be mad at me cuz i know how to treat your lady/
Hey yo poet she mo(moore) wet/
And she asked me to keep her laced in baguettes/
But i told her that that was far beyond my budget/
She said its all good and that she still love it/
CRV please dont be mad at me/
Lik usher and big said "dont bring your girl around me"/
But you know situations will arrise/
Like B-I-G i got your girl hypnotized/
Feel the rush blast this in a hurry/
Your the real pimp huh so why should you worry/
Come on no one feels you/
Your nobody until sombody kills you/
Im not a thug but IM not romantic/
SO next time dont get caught with your chest out like janet/
Your rhymes are plain and simple/
While all of mine bust like a pimple/
I got this man mad because he cant out top me/
Thats why he chose the option to copy/
Put this man away lock him up and throw away the key/
Its obvious he wants to be just like me/
Im not a mini-pimp but you keep using that becuz thats must be what you wanna be/
I cant help that your goals are lower than me/
Im at the top nice and comfy just maintaining/
I cant help your parents didnt give you home training/
The flow i rock treat you like livestock/
And smack your ass back to the boomdocks/
Me follow your raps please im not the one trying to be a thug/
Its obvious you trying to be professional and walk on the red rug/
Mini-Pimp thats old you fake thug/
Since your parents abuse you i know you need a hug/
I see you gave up because i caused to to much tension/
Your quit you dont deserve honorble mention/
You took yourself off the air like howard stern/
Just like usher go ahead and let it burn/

[jnukes]

i'm not gonna read any more of these rhymes .. i'd rather hear this on a mic .. like .. REAL freestyling .. like .. on tha phone ?? .. hah .. i'm pretty much done with this thread .. but it's pretty entertaining watching this "beef" happen

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jnukes


lets finish off jason .. NOW ..


man your rhymes are so wack, they make no sense//
your raps cost as much as yo "man", 50 cents//
i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//
in your pic in your sig you look like a nerd with glasses//
you a hustla ? i bet you haven't gotten ANY asses //
your avatar dared me to poke you, i did with my rhymes//
in fact, i poked you 61992 times //
add up your dirtiness in your rhymes, about 4 pages//
mine are clean and STILL kill and for all ages//
so i'ma end this right here, jason you're no competition//
you must be uptight like my butthole in this position//

Jnukes you nuked him. lol

[jordanriane]

lmfao, "you must be uptight like my butthole in this position," that was great,

[*wind&fire*]

i'm not gonna read any more of these rhymes .. i'd rather hear this on a mic .. like .. REAL freestyling .. like .. on tha phone ?? .. hah .. i'm pretty much done with this thread .. but it's pretty entertaining watching this "beef" happen

yeh i havent been reading many of them either... kekeke but i admit jason is improving...

[xquizit]

Wow, Jason. I must admit... you've gotten much much better.











or does it seem that way because you've ripped other people's lyrics...


EVERYONE READ THIS.

IF YOU GUYS THINK THAT OTHER DUDE IS ME ITS NOT. feel free to check the ip.

well my freestyle is hotta than his and y'all know it..and ill prove it here 

You be lying to createblog like you got a long pipe
Had me screaming last night man dude you outta sight
I don't give a f**k about you; you know I am for real
And you just know how I feel you can f**k me on da pill
Nigga let me hit you weed satisfaction guarantee
You can call me crazy boy took that nigga for his weed
Please listen to da truth kangsta thats right
Understand this shit been nasty trick on fools
You and nothing to me Ím a f**king M.C.
I can recognize a groupie when I see her in front of me
I don't mine if you bust a nut you deserved it
I think you just got served boy, give it up already
All dat shit dat you be doing trying to bust me wide open
Eat my shit nigga you know I got to have that tongue in motion

http://ohhla.com/anonymous/gangstab/b_worl...fakedit.boo.txt

Yo taki shut the f**k up man or ill knife ya
Your annihilation is set for sure, no fighting
Youll be deaded beheaded for biting, thats a violation of necro law
Dont look at me leeay, I really take that severely
You really think you wont end up like jeff healy, barely
Able to see me when youre near me, jooks for dirty looks
Me being shook of a wanna be crook? spare me
I got some serious faults, enslaving women in mysterious vaults
Craving sadistic assaults, bathing your slit wrist in salt
Shove an ice pick in your balls, youll seizure like a fiend
Going through sickness withdrawls
You diss, you realize you made a mistake, Im like a razor blade in a cake
Like being sprayed with raid in the face, while this beat is being played
Till you bleed with an ear ache, you afraid, walking through the gay parade
Your a loser and I mean it, no one likes u
The only person that likes u is michael jackson
cuz last time i was walkin in the streets, i saw u with a rubber penis
shut up and turn off your rap shit
they dont mean nothing but bullshit
if you want some come get some
cuz ur messin with the best, and getting dissed like the rest
i hope u dont get pissed  and get a physical stress
OHHH u bitch

http://necro-lyrics.wonderlyrics.com/Wnyu-Freestyle.html

Yoyoyo taki
your name is taki cuz all u do is rap in chinese
i cant understand you
Your rhymes arent even  worth a dime
I'm a true artist and this kid dosent even have a recording label
let me tell you this son
If you can beat me in this rap game
you can be on fear factor kissin my feet wit cheese on it
my beats are neat and there's no doubt about it
everyone respects me cuz i rap with honor
you just spit out shit to make fans make fun of u
i own the streets baby and will i be the next rap legend? maybe.
here's a treat for you son
I'll rip you off,
leave you in the desert 'til the voltures strip your corpse,
then rape your f**kin' wife, until my d**k is soft
'til the flesh is pealin' off,
I'm a devil consealed in cloth,
walk, walk or get stabbed with a fork,
you got a hole in your stomach,
yo plug it up with a cork, you dork,
lots of blood loss, red cross,
couldn't help your dead boss cut his head off,
brutal, sadistic, the only way,
I'll be remembered, after I'm dismemebered,
and my bones decay, a rap legend,
to the aggressionary session
when you hear my sh!t your ear drums dont quit
put the split in your wig and expose you bald ass
drop you in the ocean and raise up the tide
and thats all folks the end of you comes quick
like your relationships with d**k
trying to play it off but inside you wanna die
trying to impress your whole life and livin a lie
ur rap aint makin any differences
cuz everyday you have no life writin down lyrics on a piece of paper
hey son, i got stuff to do instead readin your whick wack ignorant lyrics
why dont u juss drop and stop
i betcha you'll make another rap just to get revenge
dont try avenge my rap
cuz i dont want any of yo bullshit

HAHAHAH

http://ohhla.com/anonymous/necro/nd_drugs/most_sad.nec.txt

yo taki
Watch this, when I shine I bring rain
Clouds, bust storms, yo, this ain't the norm
When I perform, I get you up out your seat
Get down with the real deal skills, then chill
Then show your ass how to get amped, then lamp
Stretch, flex, then tackle what's next
Cause MC's, that luck up, need to hush up
who can't brush up, on their rap style, shut the f**k up
Then duck from the one that gets buck-wild
I chop your ass in half, with a smile
Big grin, all teeth, for those who got beef
f**kin with me ock, you're six feet deep
Down in the ground, alone with no sound
while I'm up here CHILLIN, top billin
And illin, on all those, who oppose
I wanna take one more shot, strike a pose, uhh!
i came here to play wit no foo
im rappin just to make u say "who?"
my rhymes are true and yours is screwed as hell
and i bet you havent noticed and you already knew
you think ur so gangsta u dont even dress like a gangsta
last time i saw u were wearing a gap sweater and old navy jeans
im so popular my videos were played in da big screens
ur a loser and ur nothing to hip-hop
im gon reach the next level from this to top

The next 50-ja beef: Jason vs Taki

http://ohhla.com/anonymous/king_tee/iv_life/checkflw.kgt.txt

Yo taki and crack this is for both of u bitches
jersey holla..yo
I'm a hip hop artist, you style biting emcee sucker
Had a crayon contest with retarted kids and picked the wackest album cover
Picked the wrong emcee to diss subliminally, every line dissected
Yeah, I diss you on the internet, to your face and on record
For the record, I know the muck from which out you have stepped
First you sound like Beatnuts, then you're mr. 4,000 syllables
One bar, out of breath on stage a failure
Gotta quit rockin' mics and start rockin' an asthma inhaler
El-Producto, independent as Fox
Since when do indie records show up in a W-E-A box?
By saying your independent, you belittle the whole movement
Real emcee's work hard, ain't got investors to put out their music
Underground conspiracy, but this ain't used by No Limit
Mad 'cause you didn't blow up, the victim of your own wack gimmick
But some fools bought into it 'cause they don't know no better
That you're a hamburger pimp, only out for the cheddar

http://www.hhdb.com/lyrics/126/Dear-Elpee-Lyrics

Yo haters..yo azn rap fan ya..
I know you hated my freestyle rap since the first
so just sit your ass down, watch the monitor and check out my next verse
Pop you with my marines make your body burst
Imma snatch your minerals like a purse
so dont f**k with the kangsta it's a god damn curse
Second verse
u thought last time was bad ,this is worst
its like a curse
unleashing the ghost
spreadin the most
havoc, and destruction
after im finished wit u
you'll beg for tax reduction
theres nothin
that kills me more than u get on AOL thinkin u hard
Its tha Benefit
i got my mack10 bitch taken the hit
im makin u bitches quit
azn dont talk shit bout me no more im bringin u 2 the end

http://www.sclegacy.com/features/freestyle.php

IM BACK FOO

replying to cracked:

rush through your viegns like blood to your heart
i brush the dust off alll family's an rip them apart/
i hit you with more power than electric comin from thunder
im the reason i take 90 percent of souls to the deep down under/
i can make you feel bad...shit, i can make you feel good
i can spread like wild fire to everybody in the hood/
an once youve had a taste, i know you'll come back for more
cuz the high that you get from me is to good to ignore/
My Only Trust Is Crack,Pop The Toolie,Im Bustin Back/
Copping Cigarettes Is The Only Time You Touchin Packs/
4 More Lines To Drop,Then Again,Im Freestylin For Fun/
Dont Hate Cuz I Got Fans And Your Freestyling For None/
Back At RB,Shits Different,But I've Only Been Gon For Seconds/
Lil Kids In Try-Out Threads,Tryin To Spit,Gettin Rejected/

whos next f**kers

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread...829#post2173829





The battle is over.

JASON = poser. Dude, you're pathetic.

[Nugget]

HAHAAH omg wut A LOSER..dude hes no 'MC' and will never be..

heh good job ROXY!!

[WTFwasIthinking]

Wow, Jason. I must admit... you've gotten much much better.
or does it seem that way because you've ripped other people's lyrics...
EVERYONE READ THIS.
http://ohhla.com/anonymous/gangstab/b_worl...fakedit.boo.txt
http://necro-lyrics.wonderlyrics.com/Wnyu-Freestyle.html
http://ohhla.com/anonymous/necro/nd_drugs/most_sad.nec.txt
http://ohhla.com/anonymous/king_tee/iv_life/checkflw.kgt.txt
http://www.hhdb.com/lyrics/126/Dear-Elpee-Lyrics
http://www.sclegacy.com/features/freestyle.php
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread...829#post2173829
The battle is over.

JASON = poser. Dude, you're pathetic.

LMFAO... the craziest shit is that it's STILL WACK!!!! LMFAO

at least bite offa some "good" MC's... Necro's straight but damn... c'mon, are you serious? seriously, I think everyone on this site gotta give up rap cuz none of 'em been in a studio nor own a pen 'n a pad with hundreds of 16's nor even know what a 16 is... ya'll probably don't even know how to count bars....

you don't try to be hip hop... you either are or aren't... can't force it

it's a NATURAL THING... anyway, stop writin' ya wack raps 'n keyin' 'em cuz that don't make ya'll MC's....

[*Weird addiction*]

u suck u suck u suck u suck

[*CrackedRearView*]

LMFAO!! Roxanne you are now officially a goddess! Jason -- just don't show your face here...wow...

[racoons > you]

oh jason.... you've f**ked up big time, little buddy...

roxy, you deserve teh CB detective medal of the month.

[*CrackedRearView*]

LMFAO... the craziest shit is that it's STILL WACK!!!!  LMFAO

at least bite offa some "good" MC's...  Necro's straight but damn... c'mon, are you serious?  seriously, I think everyone on this site gotta give up rap cuz none of 'em been in a studio nor own a pen 'n a pad with hundreds of 16's nor even know what a 16 is... ya'll probably don't even know how to count bars....

you don't try to be hip hop... you either are or aren't... can't force it

it's a NATURAL THING...  anyway, stop writin' ya wack raps 'n keyin' 'em cuz that don't make ya'll MC's....

I admitted in my first 'rap' that I'm not a rapper, heh. I'm a poet.

Look at what's sad you guys, Jason's first rap is written by a girl and he changed a couple of the words around, LOL!

[racoons > you]

^^
does it really matter that it was agirl? i mean they can still rap, right? lol it doesnt do much for this 'hard man' image he's trying to build for himself tho, does it?