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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i heard that song (i'm a fake) again. needed to write about it again.
STOP KILLING MY FRIENDS You’re spewing rhetoric that doesn’t mean anything And make it sound as profound as the Ten Commandments Well I can write un-rhyming speeches, too Don’t you realize people take you seriously? And it must be because you’re a cutie Because you’ve proven numerous times you have shit for brains If you’re so depressed all the time learn how to deal with it Don’t have your legion of teenage worshipers Follow you to the sewer Cut yourself? Smoke? Drink? f**k? What next? Heil Hitler? If you’re not against the problem, you’re against the solution It’s best you actually comprehend what you defile the paper with I’d appreciate if you’d stop killing my friends! If you’re not afraid to die then do it already If you’re not afraid to f**k, then go f**k yourself to death But don’t drag my generation into your sweltering pot of misery There’s a world of hope for us, don’t say you’ve been there and there’s nothing left You are a fake so f**king remake yourself Step down from the throne of bullshit you cerate yourself There’s a utopian civilization in production here And you’re laughing at boobs and farts I’d appreciate it if you would Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Your lips on the mic is the finger on the kill switch Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! You aren’t helping decrease the teen Suicide statistics of today I’m left to wipe the faces You pissed on via radio waves You teach a crash course on how to mope And hope commenced it’s foul decay Ten songs in an hour, the rest is just jargon Too bad you haven’t said a thing worth saying I’d appreciate it if you would Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Your lips on the mic is the finger on the kill switch Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! I’d appreciate it if you would Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Reverend Bert Jones? Reverend Jim McCracken? Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Bert Manson? Charles McCracken? The Bert-bob comet? The Hail-McCracken comet? Reverend Bert Jones? Reverend Jim McCracken? Fans of the used? Or used fans? If you’re not afraid to die then do it already If you’re not afraid to f**k, then go f**k yourself to death But don’t drag my generation into your sweltering pot of misery There’s a world of hope for us, don’t say you’ve been there and there’s nothing left You aren’t helping decrease the teen Suicide statistics of today I’m left to wipe the faces You pissed on via radio waves I’d appreciate it if you would Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Your lips on the mic is the finger on the kill switch Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! I’d appreciate it if you would Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! Reverend Bert Jones? Reverend Jim McCracken? Stop killing my friends! Stop killing them! |
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Jan 30 2005, 09:02 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Wow, this is one of my favorites of yours.
It's very true. I love it. Excellent job, Lunchbox. Goddamn, you're just too good. |
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Jan 30 2005, 09:03 PM
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 and they say imitation is flattering Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269 |
That's awesome.
I'm surprised that only Brie and I have responded =P |
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Jan 31 2005, 08:48 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
At times I like The Used, but you're right. What's up with what bands are singing about these days? These are the people that MTV and Fuse and stupid Teen Radio and TV Stations want us to look up to, but they're pretty much telling us they want to "screw, drink, do drugs, then die" all in one night, and that we should too.
I agree that this is definately one of your best works.. And I wish that bands would stop killing my friends as well. |
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| *stephinika* |
Jan 31 2005, 09:23 PM
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wow that was great...all the stuff you write is amazing. seriously. keep it up.
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| *Kathleen* |
Jan 31 2005, 09:33 PM
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Hehe it was long, but worth the read. Rhetoric...I love that word. The sad thing is I like that song.
 Just the music, though, I swear! But good job. Anonymous (hehe) should read these - has she?
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Jan 31 2005, 09:35 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
^ no. i'm too shy to show her anything i've written. i should, though, shouldn't i? =\
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Feb 4 2005, 07:52 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
brilliant! your right all those bands and stuff...they should stop telling us to do that stuff. but we also must stop eagerly doing what they say aswell. anyways your poem is brilliant as are your other poems
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| *Kathleen* |
Feb 4 2005, 08:22 PM
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Yeah, you should show her.
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Feb 4 2005, 08:24 PM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 77 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 93,124 |
damn
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Feb 7 2005, 08:12 PM
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 stephanie .. Group: Member Posts: 1,965 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,529 |
QUOTE(Despise @ Jan 30 2005, 9:02 PM) Wow, this is one of my favorites of yours. It's very true. I love it. Excellent job, Lunchbox. Goddamn, you're just too good.  No! It's LunchboxXx, get it right.  But yeah like everyone else said it's excellent mannnn. Keep it up.
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