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Quick icon help., plz&thnks. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 ![]() |
![]() Need your opinions and feedback. Would this icon look better with the text or without the text? And do you have any other advice to help me improve this icon? And here's the original: |
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
I think it'd look better without the text. Either that, or try positioning the text somewhere else.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Human Posts: 525 Joined: Nov 2008 Member No: 695,913 ![]() |
looks ok but im not one 4 icons to begin with
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#4
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![]() Live long and prosper. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,142 Joined: Apr 2007 Member No: 514,926 ![]() |
You transformed the text incorrectly. Which makes it looks like it is jagged. As of right now, without text would be better. If you fix the text, show me, I'll let you know then.
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#5
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I changed the text to it's original position, and I think it's because of the font is why I hate the icon. >_< Any font recommendations?
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#6
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![]() show me a garden thats bursting to life ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 12,303 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 115,987 ![]() |
You transformed the text incorrectly. Which makes it looks like it is jagged. As of right now, without text would be better. If you fix the text, show me, I'll let you know then. It's the font that makes it look all jagged-y, but I like it. I think it adds something to the icon. I think you made your subjects too small- I had to squint to really see them. Doesn't help they're completely washed out in blue. Crop your images a bit bigger, so that your subjects will be larger, and then keep playing with coloring. I like the coloring, I just don't think all that blue fits with the icon and what you're trying to convey. |
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#7
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I think you made your subjects too small- I had to squint to really see them. Doesn't help they're completely washed out in blue. This. I like how you crop but you always crop too far, if that makes sense. Also I'd really change the coloring. The first thing I noticed was that the guy in blue and the background mesh too much. I know you can do it! ![]() |
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#8
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GAYYY!!!
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#9
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Irrelevant.
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 5,880 Joined: Nov 2007 Member No: 593,382 ![]() |
GAY f****t IS GAY! YOU WARNED ME FOR THAT BEENS?
I'm going to send you nonstop gay porn. Also, it's totally on subject. Your icon is gay. The guys are gay. And you are gay. I'm not being a douche cause I'm just stating facts. |
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![]() Senior Member ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 4,665 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,364 ![]() |
Yeah, but what's the significance of The Showcase forums then? To state the obvious or to provide feedback to designers?
And send me all the pr0n. Won't hurt me, will it? :) |
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#13
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![]() Mel Blanc was allergic to carrots. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Official Designer Posts: 6,371 Joined: Aug 2008 Member No: 676,291 ![]() |
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#14
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This is where being Bisexual is handy. =)
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![]() 사랑해 ~ 我愛你 ♥ ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Group: Design Staff Posts: 825 Joined: Jan 2007 Member No: 492,587 ![]() |
This. I like how you crop but you always crop too far, if that makes sense. Also I'd really change the coloring. The first thing I noticed was that the guy in blue and the background mesh too much. I know you can do it! ![]() What Natalia said about the cropping. I'd either crop closer to the figures or make the text a bit bigger. |
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